Writing Process and Revision Techniques

This video tutorial guides students on how to ensure their written responses are focused and clear. It introduces the three steps of the writing process: generating ideas, drafting, and revising. The tutorial emphasizes the importance of rereading and checking if the writing follows the planned roadmap. Through a story prompt about finding a hidden box, students learn to apply these steps, review their work, and make necessary revisions to enhance clarity and adherence to their plan.

What is the main goal of rereading your written response?

• To make it longer

• To check for spelling errors

• To add more details

• To ensure the response is focused and clear

Which of the following is NOT a step in the writing process?

• Publishing

• Generating ideas

• Revising and editing

• Writing drafts

What is a common mistake made during the revision process?

• Not rereading to ensure the roadmap is followed

• Not using a thesaurus

• Not adding enough details

• Not checking for grammar mistakes

What should you do if a part of your story is unclear?

• Make it longer

• Ignore it

• Add more dialogue

• Cross out or change unclear areas

In the example story, what detail was initially missing?

• The size of the box

• How the box felt

• The sound of the leaves

• The color of the box

What sensory detail was added to the story to enhance it?

• The box is shiny

• The box is dusty and rough

• The box is colorful

• The box is light

What is the purpose of adding sensory details to a story?

• To make it longer

• To add more characters

• To help the reader visualize the scene

• To confuse the reader

What should you do after revising your story?

• Submit it immediately

• Read it aloud to check for clarity

• Change the ending

• Add more characters

What is the final step in the revision process?

• Adding more characters

• Changing the title

• Ensuring all parts of the roadmap are followed

• Adding more dialogue

What is encouraged at the end of the lesson?

• To share your story with friends

• To apply the revision steps to your own writing

• To write a new story

• To read more books