creative mistakes

He walked away from his dessert village in Eritrea with nothing but sandals on his feet.

• wrong word

• missing comma

Martin searched for a great horned owl. He takes photographs of all the birds he sights.

• Comma

• Verb tenses

The house was flooded with light, the moon rose above the horizon.

• run-on sentence

• unnecessary comma

"Athletes on average consume 3000 calories per day."

Can this sentence be the topic sentence?

• YES

• NO

The American colonists resisted British taxation. And started the American Revolution.

• run-on sentence

• sentence fragment

I just wanted to let you know that the kids in our class did a great job on their projects.

• missing comma

• informal language

Let's delve into the mystery of my family crest through the bamboo.

• AI

• sentence fragment

Einstein, was a brilliant mathematician, used his ability with numbers to explain the universe.

• Lack adverb clause

• Lack relative clause