Editing and Revising Workout: Think Up Lesson 8.2

What change should be made in sentence 2?

• Change Two to To

• Change people to persons

• Change extreem to extreme

• Insert a comma after anorak

What change should be made in sentence 7?

• Change An to A

• Change is to are

• Change wind breaker to windbreaker

• Change doesn’t to does’nt

Revise sentence 10 to correct the mistake the author made.

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What change should be made in sentence 12?

• Change they to them

• Change at the sporting goods store to around the sporting goods store

• Change sporting goods to sporting-goods

• Change Main Str. to Main St.