LIzzo Edit and Revise

Which is the best way to combine sentence 8 and 9?

• When Lizzo was 21 years old because her father died.

• When Lizzo was 21 years old, even though her father died.

• When Lizzo was 21 years old, her father died.

• When Lizzo was 21 years old her father died.

The word attension is misspelled in sentence 21. What is the correct way to spell?

• Attenson

• Attention

• Attentsion

• Attend

What change if any need to be made in sentence 11?

• Change where to were

• Change begins to began

• Change recording to record

• No changes need to be made

What change should be made in sentence 3?

• Change but to so

• Delete the comma after Detroit.

• Change houston to Houston

• No change needs to be made.

What change should be made in sentence 16?

• Change began to begins

• Change success to sucess

• Change working to work

• Change knew to new

What change, if any, needs to be made to sentence 4?

• Change rapping to wrapping

• Change when to win

• Change friend's to friends

• No change is needed.

What change should be made in sentence 14?

• Delete the comma after 2012

• Change there to their

• Change We Are the Chalice to we are the Chalice.

• No change nees to be made.

What change should be made in sentence 10?

• Change of to off

• Change caused to causes

• Change brake to break

• Change tried to tryed

What change, if any, needs to be made to sentence 6?

• Change university to University

• Change classical to Classical

• Change flute to floot

• No change is needed.

What change, if any, nees to be made to sentence 17?

• Change My Skin to my skin

• Change second to secound

• Change album to albulm

• No change is needed.