Round 2 Recap

Home: What change needs to be made in sentence 2?

• Change lumbered to lumbering

• Change not to she was not

• Change quiet to quite

• No change needs to be made in sentence 2.

Home: What change should be made in sentence 6?

• Delete As

• Change draged to dragged

• Change felt to feeled

• Insert a comma after dry

Home: How should sentence 11 be changed?

• Change poked to pokked

• Change an egg to a egg

• Change threw to through

• Sentence 11 should not be changed.

Home: What change needs to be made in sentence 15?

• Change reaching to reeching

• Change splashes to splashed

• Change furiously to furious

• No change needs to be made.

Home: What change should be made in sentence 18?

• Change sevaral to several

• Change far to she was far

• Change waters to water’s

• Change the period to a comma

Home: What change needs to be made in sentence 24?

• Change found to finds

• Change began to begun

• Change her work to their work

• No change needs to be made in this sentence.

Home: What change needs to be made in sentence 27?

• Delete When

• Change Zoeys to Zoey's

• Change laid to lays

• No change needs to be made in sentence 27.

Home: What is the correct way to write sentence 29?

• Zoey taking one last look at the sandy mound. Then the waves carried her away again.

• Zoey took one last look at the sandy mound. Before the waves carried her away again.

• Zoey taking one last look at the sandy mound, and then the waves carrying her away again.

• Zoey took one last look at the sandy mound before the waves carried her away again.

Pay It Forward: Derrick wants to further develop the central idea of this paper by adding a detail after sentence 3. Which of these sentences could BEST follow and support sentence 3?

• Pay it forward today if you have an opportunity to do this.

• That means they’re doing something nice by helping another person who may be in need.

• This is different and not the same as paying someone back.

• I had a friend who helped me when I had to clean out my garage.

Pay It Forward: Derrick has not used the most effective transition at the beginning of sentence 10. Derrick should change As a result to —

• To conclude

• For example

• Instead

• In other words