REVISING AND EDITING

How should sentences 3 and 4 be written?

• Later, Darwin became a celebrity, when he published his controversial theory of evolution in On the Origin of Species.

• Later, when Darwin became a celebrity, he published his controversial theory of evolution in On the Origin of Species.

• Later, Darwin became a celebrity, he published his controversial theory of evolution in On the Origin of Species.

• Later, Darwin became a celebrity when he published his controversial theory of evolution in On the Origin of Species.

What change, if any, is needed in sentence 7?

• F Remove the comma after Anyway

• G Change Anyway to Consequently

• H Add a comma after scientists

• J Change historians to historyans

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 8?

• Change descriptions to descripsions

• Change observes to observed

• Change entries to entrey’s

• Delete the comma after entries

What change, if any, is needed in sentence 2?

• Change hms to HMS

• Remove the comma after ship

• Capitalize naturalist

• Remove the comma after port