Noah's/Umberto's Sentence Revision Quiz

Passage 1: Noah wants to use a better word than good in sentence 1. What word should replace good in sentence 1?

• big

• real

• fascinating

• science

Passage 1: What is the BEST revision for sentence 5?

• You just need two glasses of water, some plain, some sparkling, and also some raisins.

• You just need two clear glasses, you also need some plain water and some sparkling water, and also some raisins.

• You just need glasses, water, and raisins.

• You just need two clear glasses, some plain water, some sparkling water, and some raisins.

Passage 1: Noah forgot to add the following detail to the third paragraph (sentences 6 – 12). Then, add a few raisins to each glass. Where is the BEST place to add this sentence?

• After sentence 6

• After sentence 7

• After sentence 8

• After sentence 9

Passage 1: Which supporting detail best follows sentence 14?

• I could see the bubbles popping at the top of the glass.

• The raisins had nothing to hold them up.

• Sparkling water has bubbles in it.

• The raisins sank when I first dropped them into the sparkling water.

Passage 1: What is the BEST way to revise sentence 18?

• The experiment was fun to watch, but it also got me thinking.

• Very fun to watch, but it also got me thinking.

• It was fun to watch, so it also got me thinking.

• It wasn’t fun to watch, but it also got me thinking.

Passage 2: What change, if any, should be made to sentence 2?

• Change was to is

• Change beutiful to beautiful

• Change Bert to bert

• Change beetle to Beetle

Passage 2: What change should be made to sentence 7?

• Change wants to want

• Change wants to wanted

• Change adventure to advenchure

• Change an to a

Passage 2: What change is necessary in sentence 10?

• Change and to but

• Change spots to spot

• Change pretty to prettily

• Change graceful to gracefully