Realistic Fiction Writing for Kids - Episode 6: Revising

What is the main purpose of revising a story?

• To make the story longer

• To improve the story's readability and interest

• To change the story's genre

• To add more characters

Which of the following is NOT a method of revising mentioned in the video?

• Adding to the story

• Taking away from the story

• Changing parts of the story

• Illustrating the story

In the example provided, what word did the narrator choose to replace 'cold'?

• Cool

• Icy

• Frigid

• Chilly

What did Mary say when she dropped Sam's leash?

• Oh no, she laughed

• Oops, she whispered

• Oh dear, she shouted

• Oh no, she cried

What word did the narrator use to replace 'great' in the closing section?

• Amazing

• Brilliant

• Smart

• Clever