Revising 4.11C

What is the best way to combine sentences 3 and 4?

• Either tornadoes can be dangerous, or those living in Tornado Alley

  should know what to do during bad weather.

• Tornadoes can be dangerous, but those living in Tornado Alley should know what to do during bad weather.

• After tornadoes can be dangerous, those living in Tornado Alley should know what to do during bad weather.

• Tornadoes can be dangerous, so those living in Tornado Alley should know what to do during bad weather.

The meaning of sentence 16 can be improved by changing they to which of

the following?

• safe rooms

• tornadoes

• reports

• people

What change, if any should be made in sentence 1?

• change brother to Brother

• change me to l

• change got to getted

• make no change

What is the best way to combine sentences 5 and 6?

• She graduated high school early and went to college at the age of sixteen.

• Either she graduated high school early, or she went to college at the age of sixteen.

• She graduated high school early even though she went to college at the age of sixteen.

• She graduated high school early after she went to college at the

  age of sixteen.

My brother is funny. He tells jokes. He makes everyone laugh. What is the best way to revise the sentence to improve sentence structure and clarity? 

• My brother is funny because he tells jokes and makes everyone laugh.

• My brother tells jokes and makes everyone laugh, he is funny.

• My brother is funny, he tells jokes, he makes everyone laugh.

• My brother is funny and tells jokes and makes everyone laugh.