S1G3 Editing Practice 1

1) Anything connected to the Internet, ranges (ranging) from mobile phones to refrigerators and even toys...

• Anything

• connected

• from... to

• and

2) ...from mobile phones to refrigerators and even toys, can be use (used) to collect...

• from... to

• and even

• can

• be

3) ... to collect private information about people. Cyber-attacks has (have) become more frequent...

• people

• Cyber-attacks

• become

• more frequent

5) ... from the United States of America is a (an) 11-year-old hacker...

• America

• is

• 11

• hacker

6) ... cyber secure (security) ambasador. Through his website ,CyberShaolin, Paul teaches us

• cyber

• ambassador

• website

• teaches

7) ... Paul teaches us to defend yourselves (ourselves) from hackers. While it is not wrong to embrace the Internet...

• us

• defend

• hackers

• embrace

8) ... it is important for us to learn about cyber security for (to) protect ourselves and...

• for us

• learn about

• protect

• ourselves

10) ... is to practice (practise) good password management by using a strong mix of characters...

• to

• good password management

• using

• a