Sentence Structure Variation

Which sentence adds variety by starting with an adverb to change the focus?

• The cat crept silently toward the mouse.

• Silently, the cat crept toward the mouse.

• The silent cat crept toward the mouse.

• The cat, which was silent, crept toward the mouse.

Answer explanation

Starting with the adverb 'Silently' adds variety to the sentence structure and emphasizes how the cat moved.

Match each type of sentence opening to the effect it creates.

• Establishes the location or setting first.

• In the back of the closet, a box was hidden.

• Explains a cause or reason first.

• Because he was late, he missed the bus.

• Creates a dramatic or surprising effect.

• Suddenly, the lights went out.

Answer explanation

Each sentence opening changes the emphasis: 'Suddenly' creates drama, 'Because' states a reason, and 'In the back of the closet' sets the scene.

An author wrote a long, detailed sentence about a rocket launch. Which short sentence would create the most impact right after?

• The rocket was very large and powerful.

• Many people had gathered to watch the event.

• It was gone.

• The countdown had finished several seconds ago.

Answer explanation

A short, punchy sentence like 'It was gone.' creates a powerful contrast after a long, descriptive one, adding emphasis and impact.

Sort these examples into two categories: 'Choppy Rhythm' or 'Flowing Rhythm'.

Groups:

(a) Choppy Rhythm

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(b) Flowing Rhythm

• As the sun began to set, the sky slowly darkened into a deep blue.

• The sun set. The sky got dark.

• He ran across the field, jumped over the fence, and fell into the hay.

• He ran. He jumped. He fell.

Answer explanation

Choppy rhythm comes from short, disconnected sentences. Flowing rhythm connects ideas into longer, more complex sentences that are smoother to read.

Which sentence adds variety by starting with a dependent clause?

• I finished my homework before I played video games.

• Before I played video games, I finished my homework.

• I finished my homework, and then I played video games.

• My homework was finished, so I could play video games.

Answer explanation

Starting with 'Before I played video games,' a dependent clause, varies the sentence structure from the more common subject-first pattern.

Which sentence uses repetition to best emphasize how tired the runner was?

• The runner was very tired at the end of the race.

• Her legs ached, her lungs burned, and her mind screamed, 'Stop!'

• She was tired, so very tired, that she could barely stand.

• After running the marathon, she felt exhausted.

Answer explanation

Repeating the word 'tired' emphasizes the extreme level of the runner's exhaustion more effectively than just stating it once.

Match the choppy sentences to the single, revised sentence that provides better flow and variety.

• She walked to school even though it was raining.

• She walked to school. It was raining.

• The big, brown dog wagged its tail.

• I like to read. My sister likes to draw.

• While I like to read, my sister prefers to draw.

• The dog was big. It was brown. It wagged its tail.

Answer explanation

Combining short, simple sentences into longer, more complex ones using conjunctions and clauses creates better sentence variety and rhythm.

How can you rewrite 'The mysterious package sat on the doorstep' to create more suspense by reversing the structure?

• On the doorstep sat the mysterious package.

• The package on the doorstep was mysterious.

• A mysterious package was sitting on the doorstep.

• The doorstep had a mysterious package on it.

Answer explanation

Starting with the prepositional phrase 'On the doorstep' inverts the typical sentence order, building suspense before revealing the subject ('package').

While varying sentence structure is important, when is it often best to start a sentence with the subject?

• When you want to create a dramatic effect.

• When you want your meaning to be as clear and direct as possible.

• When you want to connect two long ideas together.

• It is never a good idea to start with the subject.

Answer explanation

The standard subject-first sentence structure (e.g., 'The cat sat.') is the clearest and most direct way to state an idea.

Sort these sentences based on their most likely purpose in a paragraph: 'To Build Detail' or 'To Create Impact'.

Groups:

(a) To Build Detail

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(b) To Create Impact

• She screamed.

• He won.

• The old house stood on a hill overlooking the town, its windows like vacant eyes and its paint peeling after years of neglect.

• Maria thought about all the fun she had at the beach, from building sandcastles to swimming in the cool, salty water.

Answer explanation

Long, descriptive sentences are used to build detail, while very short, punchy sentences are used to create a sudden impact or emphasize a point.