Realistic Fiction Writing for Kids Episode 6: Revising Your Story

The video tutorial focuses on revising a realistic fiction story. It emphasizes the importance of revising by rereading and making changes to improve the story. The instructor demonstrates revising different parts of a story, including the introduction, middle, and closing, by adding descriptive words and varying dialogue tags. The video concludes with encouragement to repeatedly revise for the best results and invites viewers to explore more writing videos.

What is the main purpose of revising a draft in realistic fiction writing?

• To make the story longer

• To improve the story's readability and interest

• To change the genre of the story

• To add more characters

In the story about Mary and Sam, what word did the narrator choose to replace 'cold'?

• Icy

• Frigid

• Chilly

• Freezing

What action did Mary take after slipping on the icy patch?

• She went back inside

• She called for help

• She sat down and cried

• She quickly got up and tried to catch Sam

How did Carlos help Mary catch Sam?

• He chased Sam down the street

• He offered Sam a donut

• He called Sam's name loudly

• He used a whistle

What is the narrator's advice for making a story the best it can be?

• Ask someone else to write it

• Keep rereading and revising

• Write it once and leave it

• Publish it immediately