How to Write an Imaginative Narrative for Kids Episode 7: Revising Your Story

The video tutorial explains the process of revising a story to enhance its quality. It begins by defining revising as making changes to improve a story, such as adding details, making parts more interesting, or removing confusing elements. The tutorial provides a step-by-step approach, encouraging writers to reread their work from a reader's perspective and ask critical questions. An example is given, showing how to revise a story introduction by choosing descriptive words and adding details. The video concludes with tips on editing and encourages viewers to check out more resources on the Teaching Without Frills channel.

What is the primary goal of revising a story?

• To make the story longer

• To improve the story by making changes

• To change the genre of the story

• To add more characters

In the example provided, what word did the narrator choose to replace 'bad'?

• Windy

• Cloudy

• Rainy

• Storming

What action did Megan take to show she was worried?

• She was trembling

• She ran faster

• She called a friend

• She started crying

Why is it important to show emotions through actions in a story?

• It reduces the need for dialogue

• It helps readers connect with characters

• It makes the story more mysterious

• It makes the story longer

What should you do after revising your story to ensure it is free of mistakes?

• Edit the story

• Rewrite the entire story

• Change the ending

• Add more characters