Using Each Sentence to Provide New Information in Your Writing

The video tutorial emphasizes the importance of using each sentence in writing to provide new and interesting information. It uses an example draft about amphibians to illustrate how to identify and remove repetitive sentences. The tutorial guides viewers through revising their writing to ensure clarity and engagement by focusing on new information. It concludes with tips for enhancing writing by adding more facts and details if necessary.

What is the main purpose of organizing sentences into paragraphs?

• To make the text longer

• To focus on specific aspects of the topic

• To confuse the reader

• To use more complex vocabulary

Why is it important to avoid repetition in writing?

• It allows the writer to use more words

• It makes the writing more colorful

• It keeps the writing clear and engaging

• It helps to confuse the reader

What is a key characteristic of amphibians mentioned in the draft?

• They have feathers

• They live only on land

• They have backbones and can live in water and on land

• They are warm-blooded

How do amphibians protect themselves from predators?

• By hiding underground

• By having slippery and sometimes poisonous skin

• By having sharp claws

• By flying away

What is the first step in revising a draft according to the lesson?

• Adding more sentences

• Checking if each sentence provides new information

• Changing the topic

• Using more complex words

What should you do if your paragraph becomes too short after removing repetitive sentences?

• Add more facts, details, and examples

• Use longer words to fill the space

• Leave it as it is

• Repeat the same sentences again

What is the benefit of revising your writing to include only new information?

• It makes the writing longer

• It ensures the writing is clear and informative

• It makes the writing more confusing

• It allows for more repetition