Do I Have to Compare in Writing Task 1

The video tutorial advises students to focus on simple organization in their essays to achieve higher scores in cohesion and coherence. It warns against overcomplicating comparisons, which can lead to disorganized writing and lower scores. The tutorial suggests grouping similar data in separate paragraphs, akin to organizing advantages and disadvantages in an argument essay. This approach ensures clarity and helps avoid including irrelevant numbers, which can negatively impact task scores.

In what way should advantages and disadvantages be presented in a comparison essay?

What is the recommended approach to making comparisons in an essay without complicating the organization?