Revising Your Persuasive Essay: Showing How Evidence Proves Your Point

This video tutorial guides students through the process of revising a persuasive essay. It emphasizes the importance of making evidence clear to the reader and provides practical steps for identifying topic sentences, explaining evidence, and adding clarity to writing. The tutorial includes examples of how to revise paragraphs to ensure that the evidence supports the writer's point effectively. By the end of the lesson, students will understand how to improve their essays by revising and editing for clarity and persuasiveness.

How can you clarify your evidence for the reader?

What does conservation mean in the context of your essay?