Making Your Narrative Flow: Avoiding Jumps in Time and Place

This video tutorial teaches how to ensure a personal narrative makes sense by identifying and correcting jumps in time and place. It covers the writing process, common mistakes, and provides a detailed example of revising a narrative for coherence. The tutorial emphasizes reading aloud, highlighting inconsistencies, and inserting transitional phrases to improve narrative flow.

How did the narrator feel after riding the mini bike into Mr. Robinson's car?

What changes did the narrator make to improve the flow of the narrative?

Explain how the narrator transitioned from being on the ground to talking to their mother.