How to Write a Research Paper for Kids - Episode 5: Revising

The video tutorial guides viewers through the process of revising a research paper, using a paper about bats as an example. It covers the importance of revising, starting with rereading the draft, and making changes to improve clarity and interest. The tutorial discusses various aspects of bats, including their appearance, habitat, diet, and behavior, while demonstrating how to enhance the paper with additional details and better word choices. The video concludes with a revised version of the paper, emphasizing the importance of thoughtful revision in writing.

How does the author plan to enhance the appearance section of the paper?

What changes did the author make to the closing statement of the paper?