Revising for Sentence Fluency

This video tutorial teaches how to revise essays for better sentence fluency by creating a smooth flow. It covers the writing process, focusing on revising drafts to improve sentence flow. The tutorial explains the concept of flow, provides steps for revising sentences, and demonstrates combining sentences for better coherence. The final section emphasizes the importance of revising and editing to enhance the overall writing quality.

What is the first step in the writing process mentioned in the video?

• Drafting the essay

• Reading and analyzing the text

• Editing the essay

• Publishing the essay

How does the video describe 'flow' in writing?

• As how readers hear the words when read aloud

• As a method to improve grammar

• As a technique to use more complex words

• As a way to make sentences longer

What is the first step in revising for sentence fluency?

• Edit for grammar

• Publish the essay

• Re-read the draft aloud

• Combine short sentences

What should you ask yourself when re-reading your draft for fluency?

• Are my paragraphs long enough?

• Are my sentences grammatically correct?

• Do my sentences flow easily one to another?

• Is my vocabulary advanced enough?

In the example given, what was Elizabeth Finley recognized for?

• Her teaching abilities

• Her efforts as a spy

• Her writing skills

• Her leadership in battle

What is the purpose of combining sentences during revision?

• To use more complex vocabulary

• To make the essay longer

• To improve sentence flow and strengthen the argument

• To reduce the number of paragraphs

What does the video suggest about the recognition Elizabeth Finley received?

• It was in the form of money she needed

• It was not enough

• It was given too late

• It was unnecessary

What is the final step in the writing process as mentioned in the video?

• Drafting the essay

• Revising for fluency

• Editing and publishing

• Analyzing the text

What should you do after combining sentences for better flow?

• Re-read the entire essay

• Add more sentences

• Rewrite the new sentences into your draft

• Check for spelling errors

Why is it important to revise for sentence fluency?

• To use more complex vocabulary

• To create a better flow and enhance readability

• To ensure the essay is grammatically correct

• To make the essay longer