Revising activity

What should you do next after revising your writing with the ARMS method?

• Read it aloud

• Rewrite

• Edit it

• Publish it

What is the third step in the writing process according to the video?

• Revising

• Editing

• Drafting

• Prewriting

What does 'A' in ARMS stand for?

• Arrange

• Assess

• Add

• Attach

Which example shows how to 'Add' to improve writing?

• Adding "buttery and crunchy" to describe popcorn

• Moving a misplaced modifier

• Removing redundant phrase

• Substituting boring words

What should be removed from writing according to the ARMS method?

• Necessary comparisons

• Well-placed modifiers

• Redundant or off-topic elements

• Interesting details

What is an example of a redundant phrase that can be removed?

• He was elated when he won

• Going to the movies is fun

• She served sandwiches on paper plates

• Describing movies as fun right after fantastic

What does the 'M' in ARMS stand for?

• Modifier

• Minimize

• Move

• Merge

Where should the phrase "on paper plates" be moved to clarify the sentence?

• after "children"

• before "she"

• after "sandwiches"

• after "served"

What does the 'S' in ARMS stand for?

• Substitute

• Simplify

• Summarize

• Support

What word from the example was substituted to make the writing more interesting?

• elated

• won

• spelling bee

• happy