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English II Grammar Second Review

Total questions: 105

Worksheet time: 1hrs 19mins

Name
Class
Date
1.
The Major League Baseball trade deadline is July 31. It comes at a moment in the season when many teams are conceivably still in the playoff hunt, so it is always a source of intrigue. Teams who have performed unexpectedly well in April, May, and June must decide whether to upgrade their rosters for the stretch run or stand pat with the players they have. It may be a hot July 4th weekend; the trade market develops quite quickly.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
. After what may be a hot July 4th weekend but not by much
c)
hortly thereafter July 4th weekend,
d)
Just after the July 4th weekend,
2.
Tim Duncan and David Robinson were known as the “Twin Towers” when they played together on the San Antonio Spurs. The nickname came not only from their height, but also from their exceptional defense close to the basket. It takes roughly five hours to drive from Dallas to San Antonio.

a)
No Change
b)
San Antonio is about five hours from Dallas by car.
c)
(The drive time between San Antonio and Dallas is about five hours.)
d)
Delete the Underlined Portion
3.
I used to love going to visit my grandmother at her house in Staunton, Virginia. She had a huge backyard where my brother, my cousin, and I would play for hours, losing ourselves in imagined worlds. We climbed trees, built forts, and staged attacks on each other’s “kingdoms,” sometimes pretending to be goblins or trolls. When my grandmother rang the bell for dinner, our invented landscapes would evaporate into the evening air as we went running to wash our hands.

a)
NO CHANGE
b)
She lived next door to a family with a big, shaggy golden retriever named Montgomery.
c)
t took about five hours for us to drive there from Charlotte, North Carolina.
d)
Memorial Day weekend was usually reserved for exactly this occasion.
4.
Octopuses, squid, and cuttlefish—all of which are characterized by bilateral body symmetry—are the ocean’s champions of camouflage. They can mimic the color and texture of a rock or a piece of coral or give their skin a glittering sheen to match the water around them. Cephalopods can perform these spectacles thanks to a dense fabric of specialized cells in their skin. But before a cephalopod can take on a new disguise, it needs to perceive the background that it is going to blend into.
Given that all of the choices are true, which one would provide information that is most relevant and meaningful to the essay as a whole?
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
ften portrayed as monsters in the movies—
c)
a group of mollusks known as cephalopods—
d)
thousands of which are sold daily in Tokyo fish markets—
5.
Scuba divers must be careful not to rise too quickly from great depths, lest they suffer decompression sickness, also known as “the bends.” This painful and potentially life-threatening phenomenon is the result of nitrogen forming bubbles in the blood as it depressurizes. The bubbles can lead to heart attacks, strokes, ruptured blood vessels in the lungs, and joint pain, which is a symptom of arthritis.

a)
NO CHANGE
b)
joint pain.
c)
joint pain, which can make it difficult to walk.
d)
joint pain, which has become much better understood since the 1970s.
6.
Tony Randazzo moved to Edgewood with his family from Italy in 2006. We started middle school together the following fall. I didn’t have any classes with Tony, and he lived far away, but I saw him at soccer practice, and we would often wait together at the bus stop.
Given that all of the choices are true, which one provides the most relevant information with regard to the narrator’s familiarity with Tony?
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
saw him at soccer practice, which was always a punishing workout.
c)
waited with him for the bus, which was driven recklessly by Mr. Hill.
d)
waited with him for the bus when my dad’s car was in the shop.
7.
It’s especially fun when kids choose to role- play as their parents. It’s in those moments that you realize just how many of your unique habits they’ve picked up over the years. Whether it’s the way you drink your coffee or how you select an avocado at the grocery store, it’s always amazing to witness these imaginative little mimics you’ve created. Most children enjoy celebrating a birthday.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
Birthdays, of course, only come once a year.
c)
Different cultures celebrate birthdays differently.
d)
DELETE the underlined portion.
8.
Uncle Joe loved to reminisce about his years as an ice road trucker. It was clear that he derived a great deal of pride from having been one of the few to stick with the job, which was incredibly dangerous and physically taxing. He told me that he had driven through more blizzards than he could remember. He had changed tires. He had navigated slippery, narrow roads above deep chasms, where one false move could send the rig tumbling down a mountainside.
Given that all are true, which of the following additions to the preceding sentence (replacing “tires.”) would be most relevant?
a)
tires which had run over rocks.
b)
tires in subzero weather.
c)
tires in Alaska.
d)
tires made of rubber.
9.
Most varieties of strawberries readily produce offspring, so many farmers simply allow them to grow into a vibrant green ground cover that requires little maintenance. The plants won’t bear as heavily as more intensively managed plants, but they will still produce delicious berries year after year.In Japan, farmers now use robots to pick strawberries. These versatile machines pick one strawberry every few seconds, using imaging software to gauge which berries are ripe. When they locate a ripe one, a robotic arm reaches out and snips its stem. Strawberries should be kept as cool as possible after picking.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
Picked berries should be kept out of the sunshine for as long as possible.
c)
Heat and light can cause strawberries to become soft and bruise easily.
d)
OMIT the underlined portion.
10.
Larger fish are usually filleted. Be sure to keep your fish fresh after you catch them; this is done by storing them in a cooler or live well. Always fill your cooler with the same water from which you’re fishing.When cleaning your fish, filleting means cutting out the meat of the fish without the bones. A filleted fish has its skin and all of its bones removed before cooking. Scaling isn’t necessary.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
The larger the fish, the likelier it should be filleted.
c)
The larger fish will be filleted.
d)
OMIT the underlined portion.
11.
The piston first travels down the cylinder, drawing in a mixture of fuel and air. The piston then goes back up toward the spark plug, compressing the mixture. At the very last second, when the piston is at its fullest reach, the spark plug sparks and ignites the fuel and air. The piston is forced back down to create power for the vehicle, and then it is pushed back up again to clear out the exhaust.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
exhaust, which is tinted red.
c)
red-tinted exhaust.
d)
exhaust, which is red in color.
12.
Both parties are planning an aggressive courtship of Latino voters, with Democrats seeking to cement their hold on this critical bloc. Organized in the 1850s, the Republican Party is trying to chip away at that advantage, perhaps by nominating a candidate like Senator Marco Rubio, the son of Cuban immigrants, or Jeb Bush, the Spanish-speaking former governor of Florida.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
The Republican Party was organized in the 1850s. It
c)
The Republican Party
d)
The Republican Party, as we know it, was born in the 1850s. It
13.
At first, you need to learn how to use the equipment. A good rule of thumb is to position your mouth six to eight inches away from the microphone that’s built to last. You also need to adjust the gain on your mic to suit the volume of your voice so that the levels don’t spike. And although some actors work without them, it’s a good idea to wear headphones when you’re starting out.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
microphone.
c)
microphone, which is constructed durably.
d)
microphone, which is built to last.
14.
Next, the coffee beans pass through a battery of machines that sort them by size and density while also removing miscellaneous debris. A giant fan blows the beans into the air. Those that fall into bins closest to the air source are heaviest and biggest; these will end up on supermarket shelves, which are frequently made of steel.

a)
NO CHANGE
b)
supermarket shelves. Most retail shelves nowadays are made of steel.
c)
supermarket shelves, which can be made of steel, or in some cases, wood.
d)
supermarket shelves.
15.
When you consider the twenty million people wounded during the course of the fighting, much having been written about the horrors of trench warfare, World War I ranks among the deadliest conflicts in human history.
Given that all the choices are true, which one is most relevant to the statement that follows in this sentence?
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
along with the more than seventeen million military and civilian deaths,
c)
and Henry Gunther who was killed one minute before the armistice took effect,
d)
n which France was badly damaged,
16.
It didn’t take long, though for the grumpy Rottweiler to trot back to his bed to protect his mammoth-sized chew toy.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
take, long though,
c)
take long though
d)
take long, though,
17.
In other words, the man equipped with the sword sharp enough, to slay a dragon, will save the kingdom.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
enough to slay a dragon
c)
enough, to slay a dragon
d)
enough to slay a dragon,
18.
I’m afraid those of us, who ate at the Chinese buffet last night, will likely have an upset stomach.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
us who ate at the Chinese buffet, last night,
c)
us who ate at the Chinese buffet last night,
d)
us who ate at the Chinese buffet last night,
19.
In other words, the camp was outfitted with the emergency rations needed, to survive the blizzard, the hikers were soon to face.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
rations needed to survive the blizzard
c)
rations, needed to survive the blizzard
d)
rations needed to survive the blizzard,
20.
Wearing athletic shoes, admittedly, sounds like a trivial issue to discuss in a dress code meeting.

a)
NO CHANGE
b)
shoes, admittedly sounds
c)
shoes admittedly, sounds
d)
shoes admittedly sounds,
21.
It took the athletic community many years to understand and publicly recognize that women were a force to be reckoned with in the sport of boxing.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
understand,
c)
understand:
d)
understand them
22.
Fans, hundreds of them lined up for blocks to see the arrival of the rapper.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
Fans hundreds of them
c)
Fans, hundreds, of them
d)
Fans, hundreds of them,
23.
Even though most people like the idea of a quiet and seemingly peaceful baby, an infant who rarely cries often has a hidden illness that needs to be quickly diagnosed.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
hidden illness,
c)
hidden, illness
d)
hidden; illness,
24.
The Road Runners Club of America; has a main office in Arlington, Virginia, with a beautiful view of the Potomac River.

a)
NO CHANGE
b)
Club, of America
c)
Club of America
d)
Club of America,
25.
Musicians, often, find that best-selling albums need at least three months in production.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
Musicians often find
c)
Musicians often, find
d)
Musicians, often find
26.
At the same time, surrealist artists and ex-patriates emigrating from the United States; left a tangible influence on modern art in Europe.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
United States
c)
United States:
d)
United States,
27.
Air-conditioned seating at the ballpark and other stadiums helps fans stay cool during the hottest summer days.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
seating, at the ballpark,
c)
seating, at the ballpark
d)
seating at the ballpark,
28.
It was late summer when my family and I arrived, at the vacation cottage, a quaint house on the edge of the lake.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
family, and I, arrived
c)
family and I arrived
d)
family, and I arrived
29.
The two main types of cake are; the dense pound cake and the more airy sponge cake.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
cake are,
c)
cake, are
d)
cake are
30.
However, all painters can appreciate the beauty of primary colors mixed with black in this graceful, but simple work of art.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
graceful
c)
graceful—
d)
graceful:
31.
I exited the trolley and walked up the steep, winding incline to the tourist shop at the boulevards end.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
boulevard’s
c)
boulevards’
d)
boulevards’s
32.
The contract’s terms state that the singer, escorted by a jazz band, must wear a Mardi Gras-inspired costume and carry a purple-frilled parasol along the two-mile parade.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
contracts terms
c)
contracts’s terms
d)
contracts’ terms
33.
When Kevin was thirteen, he purchased both Tony Aliva’s and Steve Ruffing’s skateboard’s for his birthday using the money his Aunt Silvia sent to him.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
skateboards
c)
skateboards’
d)
skateboards,
34.
A childhood nickname can cast a shadow over a persons family name.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
a person’s
c)
an individuals
d)
an individuals’
35.
After school, Susan helped Shaun change the tire of his parents car before he dropped her off at home.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
his parents’
c)
Shaun’s parents
d)
Shaun’s parents
36.
Samara said that at the fair this weekend, there will definitely be, pig’s squealing, cows mooing, and geese honking.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
be pig’s
c)
be, pigs
d)
be pigs
37.
I remembered a time when I spent my summers sitting on my grandparents sofa quietly reading books until they would inevitably order me to go play outside.

a)
NO CHANGE
b)
grandparents’
c)
grandparent’s
d)
grandparents’s
38.
I was convinced that people today would not appreciate the conservation of the old structures, barns, gas stations, and homes that one finds on a lazy Sunday afternoon while driving around the county’s dusty, backroads.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
counties dusty,
c)
counties dusty
d)
county’s dusty
39.
Torch lights near the actors’ feet, lit up the stage such that we could see the men’s expressions of pain, anger, and joy.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
actors’ feet
c)
actors feet,
d)
actors feet
40.
She had even drawn several sketches that depicted the butterflies, some making lazy circles amongst the flowers, some flitting in front of the boy’s faces.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
boys’ faces
c)
boys faces
d)
boys face’s
41.
Puppies first attempts at navigating stairs produce excited responses from owners, who stimulate and assist the animals by placing them two steps from the bottom to make the journey seem less daunting.

a)
NO CHANGE
b)
Puppy’s
c)
Puppys
d)
Puppies’
42.
We design the frosting pattern on the cake’s tiers layer by layer.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
cakes tiers,
c)
cakes tiers
d)
 tier’s for the cake,
43.
When Jennae’s sister turned sixteen, Jennae gave her both Led Zeppelin’s and The Smiths’ album’s for her birthday, and they listened to them for hours on end.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
albums
c)
albums’
d)
albums,
44.
By the end of the day, Jacksonville’s students had collected only seventy-five signatures on their petition.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
Jacksonville’s student’s
c)
Jacksonvilles student’s
d)
Jacksonvilles students
45.
To save time and still meet their customer’s needs, butchers began trimming the fat and removing bones from cuts of meat.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
needs’ of the customers,
c)
customers’ needs,
d)
customers needs,
46.
The girl was sharp as a tack and was very intelligent.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
was smart and
c)
was bright as a light
d)
DELETE the underlined portion
47.
Sophia had been running about six miles each day to prepare for her marathon. By the end of the week, she had run for—can you imagine?—forty miles!
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
run for forty miles. Wow!
c)
run for countless incredible miles.
d)
run a total of forty miles.
48.
The convention will have lectures on how technology influences academia, entertainment, and more!
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
society in general.
c)
other things too.
d)
all that stuff.
49.
It’s really cool that in some places, cars are driven on the opposite side of the road than they are in the United States.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
You’ll be shocked to find out that in
c)
In
d)
Consider, if you will, the concept that in
50.
Sue was concerned about Davey being snowed in, but she comforted herself by remembering that he could easily experience the feeling of warmth through a combination of heating pads, blankets, and space heaters.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
keep warm
c)
be kept warm as bug in a rug
d)
be heated to a healthy temperature
51.
Many species of bacteria, called extremophiles, have adapted to thrive in the most severe conditions—some can sustain the intense salinity of the deepest seas, some the high altitude and low temperatures of the Himalayas. Boiling geysers full of steam are home to still others; even the extreme heat cannot kill them.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
are pretty safe for others to live in;
c)
suit some all right;
d)
are okay habitats for some;
52.
Where once there had been a momentous battle scene, we now find vividly painted buildings, stately fountains, and car trails.

Which of the following choices best maintains the tone and style of the sentence?

a)
NO CHANGE
b)
jam-packed streets.
c)
automobile paths.
d)
bustling thoroughfares.
53.
When I was younger, I found social situations difficult to read. Graciously, I learned to pick up on subtle cues.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
Slowly, however,
c)
Unfortunately,
d)
In fact,
54.
When the subject finally comes into focus, the flash often ends up ruining the photo by overexposing the picture.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
magnifies the result of
c)
attains the consequence of
d)
results in
55.
Others have followed in Dwight Yoakam’s footsteps and migrated to Bakersfield, California. The traditional sound of Bakersfield-style country music has a captivating, delightful, and unique sound that means it’ll be around for a long time.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
allows for it to be one of those timeless things that endures for a while.
c)
ensures its continued popularity.
d)
makes a lot of fans really excited.
56.
Basically, I try to go hiking every free day I can find during the summer months.
Which of the following alternatives to the portion that is underlined would be LEAST acceptable?
a)
every weekend I can
b)
prudent leisure time intervals
c)
whenever I can find the time
d)
anytime I can spare a day
57.
The teacher believed that writing in pencil made the students unfulfilled with their schoolwork and required that everyone do their assignments in pen.

a)
NO CHANGE
b)
blow off
c)
bored to tears with
d)
careless toward
58.
The performance of the new play brought to light the issues of inequality and poverty on a larger scale than ever before.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
shined a flashlight to illuminate
c)
put a focus toward
d)
paid attention with
59.
Hearts break, wounds heal, friendships end, and children are becoming mature.
Which choice best expresses this idea in a style that is consistent with the preceding statements in this sentence?
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
kids turn into adults.
c)
people grow.
d)
the young take steps to become older.
60.
At last, when the bus begins to slow down a lot, she knows that it is nearly time to stand up and step out onto the lively Belmont Street.
Given that all of the choices are true, which one provides the most detail while maintaining the style and tone of the sentence?
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
slow with a low whine,
c)
creeps to a speed of under five miles per hour,
d)
decelerate in increments to a speed at which it will be easy to exit,
61.
The SUV turned out to be the better design, possibly because it built upon the success of two popular models—pickup trucks and station wagons—and combining the most popular features of the two vehicle types.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
but combining
c)
and combined
d)
and
62.
As a mother, a wife, and besides being a brilliant engineer, she proved that a woman need not limit her horizons.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
a
c)
along with being a
d)
also being a
63.
The kids playing in the street and the dogs wandered without collars in my aunt’s neighborhood made me very uneasy.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
wandering
c)
were wandering
d)
DELETE the underlined portion.
64.
For a person to try and to be failed is no shame, but to fear the endeavor is tragic.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
for failing
c)
to fail
d)
failing
65.
Freshmen goggle at the magnificent buildings on the campus, sophomores rush to get their required classes, juniors reacquaint themselves with their classmates, and seniors view everyone with a smug attitude. Such is the first day of college after summer break.

a)
NO CHANGE
b)
that goggle
c)
that goggle
d)
OMIT the underlined portion
66.
Heated oil crackles as it cooks the garlic, you can smell the aroma of sautéed onions wafting up from the pan. A kitchen is a wonderful place to be when someone is cooking.

a)
NO CHANGE
b)
also the wafting aroma of sautéed onions
c)
and the aroma of sautéed onions wafts
d)
and some wafting aroma of sautéed onions
67.
To build a successful corporate culture requires time, money, and to have an organization; without these, it is almost impossible to flourish in today’s hypercompetitive market.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
organization;
c)
to be organized;
d)
to have organization;
68.
She had many memories of her youth in pre-war Japan: of dressing in the finest silk kimonos and of wandering the paths among the trees at the Great Shrine of Ise.

a)
NO CHANGE
b)
wandering with
c)
of her wandering to
d)
of her wandering at
69.
Almost every orphaned child yearns to acquire the stability of a permanent family and brothers and sisters for enjoying companionship.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
the companionship of brothers and sisters can be enjoyed.
c)
for enjoying the companionship of brothers and sisters.
d)
to enjoy the companionship of brothers and sisters.
70.
Her shrieks piercing his ears and her lips pecked his cheeks finally melted his resolve, and he agreed to buy her the pony.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
were pecking
c)
peck
d)
pecking
71.
Depending on the setting of the MODE bit, the chip can function as a normal CPU or as a numeric processor.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
as well
c)
being
d)
it is
72.
Chemical engineers refine petroleum to produce gasoline, to fabricate plastic materials engineers they alter petroleum, and organic chemists utilize petroleum reagents to synthesize pharmaceuticals.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
where petroleum is altered by materials engineers in fabrication of plastic,
c)
materials engineers alter petroleum to fabricate plastic,
d)
petroleum to fabricate plastic is altered by materials engineers,
73.
Winning the lottery twice is as rare as a person getting hit by lightning three times in a row.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
someone
c)
a victim
d)
OMIT the underlined portion.
74.
She cheerily explained the operation of the restaurant while correcting the uniform of a waiter, she tasted the soup of the day, and greeting longtime customers with a smile.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
tasting
c)
tasted
d)
tastes
75.
In 1784, when most rooms were heated with a fireplace, Benjamin Franklin demonstrated his knowledge of physics by inventing the first iron stove and his interest in safety.
Which choice produces the most logical arrangement of the parts of this sentence?
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
demonstrated his interest in safety and his knowledge of physics when he invented the first iron stove.
c)
invented the first iron stove, demonstrated his knowledge of physics, and demonstrating his interest in safety.
d)
demonstrated his knowledge when he invented the first iron stove and demonstrated his interest in safety.
76.
There have been many people who have made significant contributions to the field of aviation. This group of pioneers helped give birth to modern aviation; out of this group, one stands out above all the others. Charles Lindbergh, at the age of 25, piloted the first non-stop flight from New York to Paris in over 33 hours. [1]
[1] The writer is thinking of revising the preceding sentence to read:     Charles Lindbergh piloted the first non-stop flight from New York to Paris.
If this revision was made, the sentence would primarily lose:
a)
unnecessary details that disrupt the flow of the narrative.
b)
specific details that enrich the narrative.
c)
additional details that make the paragraph confusing.
d)
repetitive information that is given earlier in the narrative.
77.
Stuart considered himself a man of mystery and was greatly amused by his own talent as a performer. He looked at his whole life as an act carried out for the benefit of the world around him. He regularly assumed the names of legendary illusionists, registering at hotels as Harry Houdini or Mandrake the Magician.

The writer is considering deleting the phrase “registering at hotels as Harry Houdini or Mandrake the Magician” (adjusting the punctuation as needed). If the writer were to make this deletion, the sentence would primarily lose:
a)
an explanation of why Stuart chose to assume these particular names.
b)
an indication of the many different places where Stuart used these names.
c)
details about the way hotel guests react to Stuart’s use of the pseudonyms.
d)
examples of illusionists whom Stuart considered worthy of emulation.
78.
Someone tapped me on the shoulder as I waited in line for ski equipment in Vail, Colorado. “You’re going to need warmer clothing than what you have on,” said a woman I had never met. She got the attention of an assistant. “He needs an insulated jacket and snow pants if he’s going to hit the slopes,” she told him. “His luggage tag says ‘Hawaii.’” 
If the writer deletes the phrase “in Vail, Colorado” from the first sentence and also deletes the final sentence of this paragraph, the essay would lose details that are: 
a)
illogical because of the great geographical distance between the two locales.
b)
vivid but unnecessary to understanding the interaction described in the paragraph.
c)
helpful to understanding the stranger’s behavior, which would otherwise be unclear.
d)
amusing and thought-provoking, since they indicate the narrator’s probable preference for light clothing.
79.
My grandparents’ estate had been in our family for generations. When we arrived, the sun was beginning to set, adding an ephemeral quality to the landscape. At the entrance to the home, the last of the daylight bounced off the smooth surface of the front door’s dark brown, mahogany frame.

If the writer were to delete the words smooth, dark brown, and mahogany from the preceding sentence, the paragraph would lose descriptive details that primarily:
a)
reveal the narrator’s emotional state upon approaching the estate.
b)
support the narrator’s case for keeping family heirlooms intact.
c)
help depict what the narrator saw when arriving at the estate.
d)
describe the craftsmanship required to build such a home.
80.
Francis couldn’t wait for P.E. because he got to play dodgeball. Francis’s strategy was to stay on the fringe for the first half of the game, appearing to be unfocused while quietly observing the players’ movements. [5] In the second half of the game, he would catch his opponents off guard and lead his team to victory.
[5] If the writer were to delete the preceding sentence, the paragraph would primarily lose a statement that:
a)
describes a specific instance in which Francis outwitted his opponents.
b)
adds an amusing tone to an otherwise formal paragraph.
c)
sets up the reader for the contrast described in the next sentence.
d)
helps explain a point about Francis’s technique that is made earlier in the paragraph.
81.
   My company’s headquarters are located in Chicago, but I’m still not used to the Illinois winters. I’ve managed to adapt to being away from home for the most part—building a small circle of friends and dating a girl from the area—but it’s still difficult sometimes. Luckily, I’m doing well at my job, and they’re steadily promoting me, but the downside is that I have less time to go back home.   Of course I miss the love and support from my friends and family back home. I go to a lot of gatherings with my girlfriend and her family. And although I’m grateful for their hospitality, it makes me miss my own family even more. The friends I’ve made at work are great, and we share some laughs, but it’s nothing like the shorthand I have with friends in my hometown.   I was born and raised in Southern California with the beach as my backyard. In the coldest months of the year in Chicago, I long to smell the briny air of the ocean. I know it’s ridiculous, but every January my mother sends me box of seashells to remind me of home. When I open the package, memories of bonfires on the beach come flooding back to me. Somehow, missing the place I was raised feels just like missing another person. [6]
[6] If the writer were to delete this final paragraph, the essay would primarily lose:
a)
details that illustrate an aspect of his hometown that the narrator especially misses.
b)
images that reveal how the narrator is slowly forgetting the beaches of his youth.
c)
a sense that the narrator is planning to move back to California as soon as possible.
d)
information about the narrator’s youth that is irrelevant to the passage’s focus on the narrator’s career.
82.
There is some upsetting news about deer in our area: their habitats are being destroyed for other uses. For example, fields on which deer graze are being cleared for the building of shopping centers and condominiums. [7] As a result, the deer population is diminishing every year.The writer is considering deleting the preceding sentence from the paragraph. If the writer makes this deletion, the paragraph would primarily lose:
a)
 an example of ways residents can help stop the destruction of deer habitats.
b)
information that strays from the main idea about the endangered deer population.
c)
an example that supports the claim that deer habitats are destroyed.
d)
scientific evidence that proves the deer population is being diminished.
83.
A firefighter was given an award for bravery in our town. Having helped rescue a family from their burning home, he was highlighted in the newspaper. The article commended him for his heroic feat, noting that few people were capable of such bravery. The article describes him as strong and agile, with a wet nose and four legs.A wet nose? Four legs? Of course, this firefighter was actually man’s best friend. For seven years, Rusty has been living in the fire station alongside his colleagues and accompanying them to each emergency. Rusty’s loyalty and bravery have earned him much acclaim throughout our state and have made him the most-loved dog since Lassie.

If the firefighter were to delete the questions “A wet nose? Four legs?” from the paragraph, the essay would primarily lose:
a)
an emphasis on the surprising twist in the paragraph.
b)
nothing, since this is an unnecessary detail.
c)
an assertion of the paragraph’s main idea.
d)
a solemn tone that contradicts the rest of the paragraph.
84.
I had worked harder on this book report than anything else in my life. Thanks to this assignment, I ate, drank, and dreamed The Odyssey. I knew it would be devastating if Mrs. Daniels gave me anything less than a perfect grade. I was prepared to see a typical letter grade of A, B, C, D, or even F, but instead she had written, “See me after class.” [9]
[9] The writer is considering deleting the first part of the preceding sentence, so that the sentence would read:   She had written, “See me after class.”
If the writer were to make this change, the essay would primarily lose:
a)
examples of the grades the narrator typically receives on book reports.
b)
a contrast between what Mrs. Daniels wrote and what the narrator was anticipating.
c)
details that suggest that the narrator knew the grade before the book report was returned to her.
d)
an indication that the narrator deeply respected Mrs. Daniels.
85.
   Sometimes the hardest part of writing a book is putting that very first word down onto the page. Staring at a blank page in August of 1998 was the most terrifying feeling Chang had ever experienced. By December, he was celebrating with his friends and family: Chang had just completed the first chapter of what would become his best-selling masterpiece. [10]
The writer is concerned about the level of detail in the preceding sentence and is considering deleting the phrase “the first chapter of” from it. If the writer were to make this deletion, the paragraph would primarily lose information that:
a)
clarifies that only one chapter of the novel had been written by December of 1998.
b)
makes clear that by December of 1998, Chang had already begun writing the second chapter of his novel.
c)
provides evidence that Chang’s loved ones believed the entire novel was completed at this time.
d)
reveals how much time and effort would go into writing a novel the length of Chang’s.
86.
In the late twentieth century, sculpture was making an enormous comeback. A new generation of artists had found their passion within the medium, and they took it on in innovative and modern ways. In the mid-1980s, the Metropolitan Museum of Modern Art commissioned three local artists to sculpt a seventeen-foot statue in the museum’s lobby.

If the underlined phrase were deleted, the sentence would primarily lose a detail that:
a)
provides new and relevant information to the sentence.
b)
is vague and unnecessary to the sentence.
c)
repeats details that have already been mentioned in the paragraph.
d)
must be included for the sentence to be grammatically correct.
87.
On August 8, 1914, The Imperial Trans-Antarctic Expedition was underway. Sir Ernest Shackleton, famed polar explorer, left Plymouth, England, to lead what he intended to be the first land crossing of the Antarctic continent. A team of 28 men were dispatched for the voyage. Their destination would be Deception Island in the Ross Sea, north of the tip of the Antarctic Peninsula. Shackleton’s plan was to first sail his ship, The Endurance, to the Vahsel Bay area. From there, he and his men would undertake an 1,800-mile journey across land to Deception Island using dogs, sledges, and other equipment.Months into the trip, The Endurance sank after it became trapped in ice and was crushed. Stranded, Shackleton and his crew were forced to make encampments on the drifting ice until it melted and disintegrated. They then launched their lifeboats and headed for the closest land mass, Elephant Island. It was uninhabited and devoid of any usable resources.Shackleton left his men on Elephant Island and made an open-boat journey of 800 miles to the closest island of South Georgia. There, he was able to mount a rescue mission of his crew, who had been left on Elephant Island for months. The island of South Georgia would be the crew’s final destination.
If the writer were to delete the final paragraph of this essay, the essay would primarily lose information that:
a)
explains how Shackleton was able to rescue his stranded crew and bring them to South Georgia.
b)
explains why journeying to Elephant Island was not part of Shackleton’s initial plan.
c)
describes the conditions Shackleton faced during his solo journey to South Georgia.
d)
 indicates Shackleton’s disappointment at having to mount a rescue mission rather than continue with the intended plan.
88.
I grew up with a Christmas tree farm in my backyard and loved to examine the trees. Each new sapling had its own distinct shape that I found captivating. [13] I quickly became an expert arborist and worked my way to managing the family business.
[13] The writer is considering revising “Each new sapling had its own distinct shape that I found captivating” to read “Each new sapling had its own unique shape.” That revision would cause the sentence to lose primarily:
a)
variation on the writer’s theme of his career as an arborist.
b)
 fascination with the writer’s own use of descriptive language.
c)
emphasis on the narrator’s enthusiasm for the trees.
d)
details describing the various characteristics of the trees.
89.
   Industry outsiders are always surprised by how many recorded songs musicians have in their repertoire. Record producers will typically have an artist record as many songs as possible so they can edit them and pick out the best songs. Generally, an album will only include about twenty percent of what was originally recorded in the studio. [14] Why don’t we ever hear the other songs?[14] If the writer were to delete the preceding sentence, the essay would primarily lose:
a)
a detail about the volume of songs an artist records when making an album.
b)
 a factual detail about how song selection increases an artist’s fan base.
c)
information that helps put record production into a broader context.
d)
a potential answer to the question asked next in the paragraph.
90.
As a brilliant inventor, Alexander Graham Bell laid the foundations for many of the technologies we still use today. Bell’s experimentation with electrical currents and sound waves led to his invention of the telephone in 1874. Many of his theories were challenged, but Bell’s invention was financially backed in part by someone else who had faced doubt over his inventions—Thomas Edison (1847-1931). [15]
[15] The writer is considering deleting the parenthetical information from the preceding sentence. If the writer were to make this deletion, the paragraph would primarily lose:
a)
information that helps explain why Bell was eager to collaborate with Edison.
b)
a time frame during which Edison was recognized in his field.
c)
nformation needed to put Edison’s work into historical context.
d)
the estimated number of years that Edison was in school.
91.
A flowing waterfall crashes against the rocks, shimmering stones rustle on the river bottom, and the sun glisten off the sparkling water.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
glistening
c)
has glistened
d)
glistens
92.
His efforts to boost sales have been praised by upper management, who admired his strong work ethic and determination.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
has been
c)
was
d)
would have been
93.
Nearly every piece of music that is played at the club include someone singing loudly.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
include somebody
c)
includes someone
d)
includes them
94.
These days, with people traveling all over the world in mere weeks, it’s easy to forget that at one point traveling the world wererare.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
have been
c)
are
d)
was
95.
Almost every ski shop in Colorado have skis designed for deep powder and back country skiing.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
have skis and designed
c)
has skis designed
d)
have skis that designed
96.
The color scheme of the various canvases create a harmonious blend of light and dark landscapes.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
have the effect of creating
c)
are intended to create
d)
creates
97.
What was once found only in science fiction are now part of our everyday lives.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
have been
c)
were
d)
is
98.
When I visited the beach the next year, I noticed for the first time what a massive variety of shells was on the shore.
a)
NO CHANGEN
b)
massive variety of shells were
c)
massive variety, of shells was
d)
massive variety of shells
99.
Barking, the sound most often associated with dogs, by themselves tell us much about the state of mind of an animal.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
on themselves tell
c)
on itself tells
d)
by itself tells
100.
One of the slowest methods of cooking that still results in deep flavors and satisfying tastes is roasting.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
One of the most slowest
c)
The most slow
d)
The slowest
101.
Such endorsement of women’s contributions were to be the turning point in scientific and technological advances.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
if it were
c)
was
d)
if it was
102.
His photos of famous landmarks includes Yellowstone, the Grand Canyon, and the Rocky Mountains.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
does include
c)
including
d)
include
103.
When sweat from an increase in heart rate and blood pressure occur, the body is able to cool down.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
occurs
c)
are occurring
d)
happen
104.
Not one of the children running around the brightly colored slides and ropes were a friend of my sister.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
was a
c)
was an actual
d)
would have been an actual
105.
Some Japanese women having viewed the binding of feet as symbolic of their history of limited human rights.
a)
NO CHANGE
b)
view 
c)
views
d)
has viewed