Can you provide textual evidence from the short story to show why Mr. X did not acknowledge Mr. Y?

You imply that this point supports your argument, but it actually contradicts your point in paragraph 3. Think you must either change your argument or your example.

You answer is too vague. Please rewrite

You need to use appropriate adjectives to elicit character traits.

This has the potential of being an excellent essay, but it lacks organization. Also, your grammar and syntax need a lot of work.

You have done good research about genetic engineering.

Substitution should be done carefully in the formula.

Memorize the Surah with correct pronunciation and Tajweed rules

Sentence's structure should be accurate