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WorksheetsWeekly Assessment Review 190321
Total questions: 10
Worksheet time: 5mins
What is the most effective revision to make in sentences 1-3? (7.19A)
Change black stallion to Black Stallion in sentence 1.
Change Diamond to diamond in sentence 2.
Change Police Force to police force in sentence 3.
No change is needed in sentences 1-3.
Sierra would like to add the following detail to the third paragraph (sentences 10–14). (7.14C)
There were no funds for quality food and no trainers to exercise the animals.
After sentence 11
After sentence 12
After sentence 13
After sentence 14
Which of these changes needs to be made in sentences 15-18? (7.19A)
a. Change it’s to its in sentence 15.
b. Change patrol to Patrol in sentence 16.
c. Change he appeared to he appears in sentence 18.
d. No change is necessary in sentences 15-18.
What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 17? (7.14C)
a. Searching the Internet, she found Dudley listed for sale.
b. She searched the Internet, she found Dudley listed for sale.
c. Searching the Internet was where she found Dudley listed for sale.
d. No revision is needed in sentence 17.
What is the best way to combine sentences 19 and 20? (7.19C)
a. She fell in love with Dudley although she visited the McGee Ranch the next week.
b. When she fell in love with Dudley she visited the McGee Ranch the next week.
c. She visited the McGee Ranch the next week she fell in love with Dudley.
She visited the McGee Ranch the next week, and she fell in love with Dudley.
Which of these changes needs to be made in sentence 23? (7.19A)
a. Remove the comma after there.
b. Change mane to main.
c. Change coarse to course.
d. No change is necessary in sentence 23.
What is the most effective way to revise sentence 25? (7.14C)
a. The exercise was regular and the diet was strict, Dudley grew trim and sleek, and he was able to make the first cut.
b. With regular exercise and a strict diet, Dudley grew trim and sleek; he was able to make the first cut.
c. The regular exercise and strict diet that caused Dudley to grow trim and sleek was able to make the first cut.
d. With regular exercise the diet was strict, so Dudley grew trim and sleek; he was able to make the first cut.
In sentence 27, Sierra does not think that sane is the best word to use. Which of the following would be a more effective word to use in this sentence? (7.14C)
a. calm
b. friendly
c. reasonable
d. open
What is the best way to combine sentences 38 and 39? (7.19C)
a. Kate, the next day led Dudley, who had gathered for the special ceremony, into a grooming stall.
b. A group had gathered for the special ceremony when Kate led Dudley into a grooming stall the next day.
c. When Kate led Dudley into a grooming stall the next day, a group had gathered for the special ceremony.
d. In the grooming stall, where a group had gathered for a special ceremony, Kate led Dudley the next day.
Sierra would like to add a sentence to bring her story to a more effective close. Which sentence could she add after sentence 42 to help achieve this goal? (7.14C)
a. As the son of Zeus and Diamond, Dudley was proud of his heritage.
b. The plain little colt had finally become the horse he had been bred to be.
c. He was ready to move back to the McGee ranch and be with his family again.
d. He would never be the horse that people had hoped for, but he was still special.
