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WorksheetsTSI Practice Test Revising and Editing
Total questions: 15
Worksheet time: 1hrs 15mins
In context, which of the following is best to insert at the beginning of sentence 7 (reproduced below)?
Japanese researchers are much more familiar with it and have spent decades studying its potential uses.
As a result,
Ironically,
However,
In addition,
In context, which of the following sentences would best be inserted between sentences 9 and 10?
New research shows that seaweed may also possess the power to repair tissue damage in heart attack patients.
Planting a large-scale seaweed farm will likely meet with stiff opposition.
Maine Seaweed Co., for instance, harvests the seaweed naturally available along the U.S. coast.
Some say that seaweed-based fuel may one day be competitive with petroleum.
In context, which of the following is the best way to revise and combine sentences 1 and 2 (reproduced below)?
Seaweed-based fuel could one day power your car. It is more than just an ingredient in a purifying face mask or a sushi roll.
Seaweed-based fuel could one day power your car, it is more than just an ingredient in a purifying face mask or a sushi roll.
Seaweed-based fuel could one day power your car because it is more than just an ingredient in a purifying face mask or a sushi roll.
Seaweed is more than just an ingredient in a purifying face mask or a sushi roll; seaweed-based fuel could one day power your car.
Fuel from seaweed could one day power your car so it is more than just an ingredient in a purifying face mask or sushi roll.
In context, which is the best revision to sentence 13 (reproduced below)?
They say that the seaweed-based fuel would work better in automobiles than ethanol and be easier to transport.
Replace "They say" with "Advocates contend."
Replace "would work" with "would be."
Delete "and be easier to transport."
Insert "their" before "automobiles."
In context, where would the following sentence best be placed?
There are a number of possible reasons for this.
After sentence 2
After sentence 4
After sentence 6
After sentence 9
Select the best version of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose the first answer.
It is important to learn how to swim, even if one is afraid; the skill will invariably prove useful later in your life.
one is
you are
everyone is
they are
Think about how you would rewrite the following sentence according to the directions given, and then choose the best answer. Keep in mind that your revision should not change the meaning of the original sentence.
Carmen created a new piñata by constructing a papier-mâché figure and decorating it with brilliantly colored tissue paper.
Rewrite, beginning with: "To create a new piñata, ...". The next words will be:
Carmen constructed a papier-mâché figure
Carmen, constructing a papier-mâché figure
a papier-mâché figure that Carmen had to construct
that Carmen would construct a papier-mâché figure for
Select the best version of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose the first answer.
Horror films that keep viewers in a state of endless fright and which draw record-breaking crowds.
that keep viewers in a state of endless fright and which draw
keep viewers in a state of endless fright and drawing
that keep viewers in a state of endless fright draw
that keep viewers in a state of endless fright and they draw
Select the best version of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose the first answer.
According to explorers, a "Lost Falls" resembling New York's Niagara Falls have been found in Tsangpo River Gorge in the Himalaya Mountains.
have been found
has been found
having been found
being found
Select the best version of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose the first answer.
The idea that lightning never strikes the same place twice is one of the oldest and most well-known weather-related myths; in fact, lightning strikes the Empire State Building in New York City about 100 times per year.
in fact
therefore
moreover
in contrast
Select the best version of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose the first answer.
Facing a 50% cut in funding for the library, the director was forced to lay off two librarians and sharply reduce hours of operation.
the director was forced
forcing the director
this forced the director
two librarians were
Think about how you would rewrite the following sentence according to the directions given, and then choose the best answer. Keep in mind that your revision should not change the meaning of the original sentence.
If Antarctica's icebergs could be floated north before melting, many arid areas would experience relief from drought.
Rewrite, beginning with: "If they could be floated north before melting, ...". The next words will be:
relief would be brought
many arid areas would experience
Antarctica's icebergs would bring
drought relief would be experienced
Select the best version of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose the first answer.
In the Roman Empire, the first fish to be brought indoors was the sea barbel, it was kept under guest beds in small tanks made of marble.
sea barbel, it
sea barbel, which
sea barbel, but
sea barbel and
Think about how you would rewrite the following sentence according to the directions given, and then choose the best answer. Keep in mind that your revision should not change the meaning of the original sentence.
In some places, virtually all the topsoil has washed away, leaving the subsoils to sustain the crops.
Rewrite, beginning with: "In some places, the subsoils must sustain the crops ...". The next word will be:
although
because
until
before
Think about how you would rewrite the following sentence according to the directions given, and then choose the best answer. Keep in mind that your revision should not change the meaning of the original sentence.
Hawaii, which consists of eight major islands and many smaller ones, and which used to be known as the Sandwich Islands, was admitted to the Union as the fiftieth state in 1959.
Rewrite, beginning with: "Formerly known as the Sandwich Islands, and consisting of eight major and many smaller islands, ...". The next word will be:
Hawaii was
in 1959
the Union
Hawaii, which
