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During their visit, they noticed the poor condition of the place. The beds were very old but there were only a few study tables for the children.

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When the members returned to school, they tell the teacher adviser of the club, Madam Wong that they planned to carry out a charity same.

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They wanted to raise money and they could buy furniture for the children.

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Madam Wong then talked to the headmistress about a plan and she agreed to it immediately.

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She also said that it would be better for them to hold the event annual.

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The members of the club was very pleased to hear it.

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After the headmistress made an announcement about the event, many student contributed food, clothes and household items.

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The was a huge turnout in the day of the charity sale.

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The members of the Citizen Club managed to collect over RM 3000 and they buying a new furniture for the children.

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Read the message from your friend, Nathan. In about 80 words, write a message to Nathan suggesting places to visit.