WorksheetsEnglish II Editing
Total questions: 10
Worksheet time: 20mins
Which two sentences are written incorrectly?
(Revising: Many times there are two choices that have a grammatic error. If you can find these, then you can better your chance at choosing the correct answer.)
My friends and I always love to sing together; we harmonize so well.
My friends and I always love to sing together, we harmonize so well.
My friends and I always love to sing together, because we harmonize so well.
My friends and I always love to sing together, for we harmonize so well together.
Which two sentences are written incorrectly?
(Revising: Many times there are two choices that have a grammatic error. If you can find these, then you can better your chance at choosing the correct answer.)
We can't always be right and someone has to take the blame.
We can't always be right; so someone has to take the blame.
We can't always be right; someone has to take the blame.
We can't always be right, so someone has to take the blame.
The alarm buzzed. Jordan smashed her fist down on it--hard. It flew off the nightstand and bounced off her cat, Armstrong. The cat yowled indignantly and rocketed out the room.
What is the correct way to write sentences 23 and 24?
(23) Although many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct. (24) Scientists are still making discoveries.
Many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct, scientists, however, are still making discoveries.
Although many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct and scientists are still making discoveries.
Many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct, but there are scientists. Who are still making discoveries.
Although many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct, scientists are still making discoveries.
What is the correct way to write sentence 26?
(26) In closing, I give you this solemn promise, if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.
In closing, I give you this solemn promise. That if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.
In closing, I give you this solemn promise: if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.
In closing, to give you this solemn promise: if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.
Sentence 26 is written correctly in the paper
The meaning of sentence 24 is unclear. The clarity of this sentence can be improved by changing They to —
(23) Hamm became an instant celebrity and the face of women’s soccer. (24) They lined up to have her endorse their products in advertisements. (25) In the most famous of these ads, Hamm challenged Michael Jordan to a series of sports contests, while the song “Anything You Can Do, I Can Do Better” played in the background.
Some advertisements
Various women
Sports companies
International faces
Which sentence is correct?
All around the world, the season change, and the weather changes, too.
all around the world, the season change, and the weather changes, too.
All around the world the season change and the weather changes to.
All around the world, the season change, and the whether changes, two.
Which visual image would best entice new baseball players to join the LaVergne Baseball League?
the team with a huge trophy after winning a game
the coach conducting a baseball practice
the team practicing on the baseball field
the bleachers filled with parents encouraging the team
The earth that's nature's mother is her tomb;
What is her burying grave, that is Rainbow in her womb;
