WorksheetsFinal Review 2B
Total questions: 218
Worksheet time: 7hrs 15mins
Katie is an incredible artist; Jamyia is too.
simple
compound
complex
compound-complex
During snack, Davis often shares food with his classmates, but no one ever says thank you.
simple
compound
complex
compound-complex
Ja'Mykal does not enjoy sitting between Emily and Cecilia because they tell him to stop talking.
simple
compound
complex
compound-complex
Both Everardo and Ja'Quavian are kind and mannerly; they are true gentlemen.
simple
compound
complex
compound-complex
Because Calaia always organizes Mrs. Robinson's Chromebook cart, she received a surprise.
simple
compound
complex
compound-complex
When we visited Paris, we saw the Eiffle Tower.
Unless we get rain soon, the flowers will die.
I will finish my homework after the movie is over.
We went to Danube because we ran out of eggs.
If you work on Saturday, you will not have time.
independent clause
dependent clause
Because he ran, he was able to catch the bus.
Independent Clause
Dependent Clause
I will stay with you until the sun sets.
Independent Clause
Dependent Clause
Although we ran, we never finished on time.
Independent Clause
Dependent Clause
So long as you know, I will be waiting for you.
Independent Clause
Dependent Clause.
Zoologists call the American buffalo a bison.
May weigh up to three thousand pounds.
Live in herds and feed on grass.
Bison were difficult to hunt on foot.
Now, more than thirty thousand.
Brought to America by the Spanish.
What is a participle?
verb pretending to be a noun
verb pretending to be an adjective
noun pretending to be a noun
adjective pretending to be a verb
Find the participle:Sally could not sleep with that blinking light from the television's power button.
sleep
blinking
could
power
Find the participle: The man shielded his eyes from the blinding sun as he stepped out of the movie theater.
Shielded
stepped
eyes
blinding
Find the participial phrase: Yawning widely, the student struggled to stay awake in class.
in class
the student struggled
yawning widely
to stay awake
Find the participial phrase: Opening the book to the last page, Sally read the ending first.
the last page
Sally read the ending
ending first
opening the book to the last page
Find the participial phrase: The girl wearing the blue shirt ran down the hallway.
ran down the hallway
wearing the blue shirt
down the hallway
the girl wearing
Find the participial phrase: The children playing in the park belong to the school next door.
playing in the park
school next door
belong to the school next door
in the park
Find the participial phrase: The pilot pushed on the yoke, changing the direction of the plane.
changing the direction of the plane
pushed on the yoke
the pilot pushed on the yoke
direction of the plane
Find the participial phrase: The curtains closed at the end of the play, bringing the night of theater to an end.
end of the play
to an end
the curtains closed
bringing the night of theater to an end
What are appositives phrases always separated from noun phrases by?
Nothing
Period
Semi-colon
Comma(s)
Where does the comma go with appositives that begin the noun phrase?
Before and after the appositive phrase
Before the appositive phrase
After the appositive phrase
These appositives do not use commas
Where does the comma go with an appositive phrase that adds detail at the end of a noun phrase?
Before the appositive phrase
After the appositive phrase
Before and after the appositive phrase
These types of appositives do not use commas
Where do the commas go with an interrupter appositive?
Before and after the appositive phrase
After the appositive phrase
Before the appositive
These types of appositive phrases do not use commas.
Somehow, Bobby, the mischievous toddler, climbed out on the roof.
Somehow, Bobby
the mischievous toddler
climbed out
on the roof
Basketball, my favorite sport, requires a great deal of stamina.
basketball
my favorite sport
requires a great deal
of stamina
Finn, my youngest nephew, is spending the night at my house.
Finn
my youngest nephew
is spending the night
at my house
When the retired teacher ran into Janet, her long lost student, Janet squealed with delight.
When the retired teacher ran into Janet
her long lost student
Janet squealed
with delight
What are appositives?
noun phrases added to nouns
noun phrases added to verbs
verbal phrases added to verbs
prepositional phrases
What do appositives do?
gain the audience’s attention
take away the audience’s attention
explain and elaborate
move from negativity to positivity
What is the appositive phrase in the following:
In It's a Wonderful Life, one of the most popular movies ever made, a character named Clarence wants to get his wings.
, one of the most popular movies ever made,
, a character named Clarence wants to get his wings.
In It's a Wonderful Life, one of the most popular movies ever made,
In It's a Wonderful Life,
True or false?
Appositives can draw attention to the qualities of a person, place, or thing that are important or relevant to your writing purpose.
True
False
How can the following two sentences be joined together using an appositive phrase?
The professor explained her interpretation of the story. She was a woman of keen insight.
The professor explained her interpretation of the story, and she was a woman of keen insight.
The professor, a woman of keen insight, explained her interpretation of the story.
She was a woman of keen insight, the professor explained her interpretation of the story.
The professor, she was a woman of keen insight, explained her interpretation of the story.
Which part of the sentence is an appositive phrase?
The dog climbed into the plastic swimming pool, a great escape, in order to beat the heat.
the dog climbed
into the plastic swimming pool
to beat the heat
a great escape
Which part of the sentence is an appositive phrase?
While falling asleep, some people experience hypnic jerks, involuntary twitches of the body. Experts say they're normal, but the cause is unknown.
While falling asleep,
some people experience hypnic jerks
involuntary twitches of the body
Experts say they're normal
but the cause is unknown.
What is Fragment Fred's crime?
Fragment Fred sticks two complete sentences together with a comma and no FANBOY.
Fragment Fred's sentences don't make sense; they are out of order or make you think, "Huh?"
Fragment Fred pretends that a part of a sentence is a whole sentence.
Fragment Fred sticks two complete sentences together with thin air.
Which sentence DOES NOT have a Fragment Fred?
I hid the truth from my parents. When I told them I had finished my homework.
After my parents caught me lying, they no longer trusted me. I cried.
Since I cannot see my friends. I feel like I am not as close with them.
My parents won't let me hang out with my friends. Because I lied to them.
What is Comma Splice Carl's Crime?
Comma Splice Carl sticks two complete sentences together with a comma and no FANBOY.
Comma Splice Carl's sentences don't make sense; they are out of order or make you think, "Huh?"
Comma Splice Carl pretends that a part of a sentence is a whole sentence.
Comma Splice Carl sticks two complete sentences together with thin air.
Which sentence has a comma splice?
Since he never left the house, he didn't know what the outside world was like.
She didn't understand the first time, so she looked at it again.
Darryn was dizzy, he nearly tipped over.
She had one option left: run away.
A Run-on Ralph is a sentence that...
combines two complete sentences together with only a comma and no FANBOY.
doesn't make any sense and makes you think, "Huh?"
combines two complete sentences together with thin air.
Which sentence is a Run-on Ralph?
The sun is bright put on some sunblock.
Put on the sunblock because the sun is bright.
The sun is bright, so put on some sunblock.
What is Awkward Arthur's Crime?
Awkward Arthur sticks two complete sentences together with a comma and no FANBOY.
Awkward Arthur's sentences don't make sense; they are out of order or make you think, "Huh?"
Awkward Arthur pretends that a part of a sentence is a whole sentence.
Awkward Arthur sticks two complete sentences together with thin air.
Which of these sentences is an Awkward Arthur?
My father was very clear, he told me how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes.
My father was very clear about how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes.
Because he was very clear, I knew how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes.
About how long to wait my father was very clear before trying to flip the pancakes over.
What is the best way to correct this Awkward Arthur?
"About how long to wait my father was very clear before trying to flip the pancakes over."
My father was very clear, and he told me how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes.
My father was very clear; about how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes.
Because he was very clear I knew how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes.
My father was very clear about how long to wait; before flipping the pancakes over.
What Sentence Bad Guy is in the following sentence?
Erin enjoyed the bouquet of tulips Dimitri gave her on prom night she prefers roses.
Fragment Fred
Run on Ralph
Comma Splice Carl
Awkward Arthur
What Sentence Bad Guy is in the following sentence?
Ms. Ruiz saying hi to her students, and they strutted into the classroom.
Fragment Fred
Run on Ralph
Comma Splice Carl
Awkward Arthur
What Sentence Bad Guy is in the following sentence?
I’m thinking of skipping the twins' birthday party, they're really rude.
Fragment Fred
Run on Ralph
Comma Splice Carl
Awkward Arthur
What Sentence Bad Guy is in the following sentence?
There are many ways to frighten little brothers. For example, by hiding under their beds and waiting for dark.
Fragment Fred
Run on Ralph
Comma Splice Carl
Awkward Arthur
The morning is so bright, and the night is as black as the sea.
What is a complex sentence made of?
2 independent clauses.
Complex words.
2 dependent clauses.
1 independent and 1 dependent clause.
How do you connect the clauses in a compound sentence?
comma & FANBOY
just a FANBOY
subordinating conjunction (SWABI)
comma
Using a celebrity endorsement:
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
"78% of drivers prefer Subaru"
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
"If you want your parents to be proud of you you'll study for the test."
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
"Leading experts agree that this toothpaste is the best in the world and will help make your teeth not have embarrassing yellowing stains."
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
"If you don't chew Big Red gum then you are a loser."
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
"4 out of 5 people want to see the new Avengers movie."
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
"Smoking is one of the leading causes cancer, so this proves that it is bad for you."
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
"When I was your age there were no video games to play, so we had to go outside and play. Kids were much more physically fit because of this."
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
"A donation of 5 dollars a week can make the difference in the lives of these homeless puppies."
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Using an expert:
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Using facts:
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Making you feel sad:
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Scaring you:
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Showing you statistics
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Using a complex vocabulary:
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
"You should consider another road if you leave later. My policeman neighbor told me that that street is far more dangerous and scary at night than during the daytime."
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Which sentence best describes the main idea of the paragraph?
What is the main idea of this paragraph?
By S. E. Hinton
When I stepped out into the bright sunlight from the darkness of the movie house, I had only two things on my mind: Paul Newman and a ride home. I was wishing I looked like Paul Newman---he looks tough and I don't--- but I guess my own looks aren't so bad. I have light-brown, almost-red hair and greenish-gray eyes. I wish they were more gray, because I hate most guys that have green eyes, but I have to be content with what I have.My hair is longer than a lot of boys wear theirs,squared off in back and long at the front and sides, but I am a greaser and most of my neighborhood rarely bothers to get a haircut.Besides, I look better with long hair.
What is the main idea?
By Roald Dahl
By the time she was three, Matilda had taught herself to read by studying newspapers and magazines that lay around the house. At the age of four, she could read fast and well and she naturally began hankering after books. The only book in the whole of this enlightened household was something called Easy Cooking belonging to her mother, and when she had read this from cover to cover and had learnt all the recipes by heart, she decided she wanted something more interesting. "Daddy," she said, "do you think you could buy me a book?" "A book,” he said. "Whatd' you want a flaming book for?" "To read, Daddy." "What's wrong with the telly, for heaven's sake? We've got a lovely telly with a twelve-inch screen and now you come asking for a book! You're getting spoiled, my girl!"
What is the main idea?
What is the main idea?
What is the main idea of the paragraph?
What is the author main point?
What is happening?
What is the purpose of the thesis?
To remind your reader what your paper is about
To state your opinion and the reasons for your opinion
To hook the reader's attention
To use vocabulary words
Type of appeal: “If you don’t purchase this life insurance, and something happens to you, how will your family survive?”
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Type of Appeal: “Caring for the environment may not change your life, but it will change the lives of your children.”
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
What are the AWUBITS?
words that you can use to make an independent clause dependent.
Iron Man's catchphrase
you put them in the middle of two sentences with a comma
I was bewildered when I couldn't find my keys.
simple
compound
complex
My friend went on one of her political tirades, and everyone left the room.
simple
compound
complex
It was crucial for her to make a report because the people were way out of control.
simple
compound
complex
He couldn't suppress his tears after the breakup.
simple
compound
complex
His dubious lies fooled me, and it totally blew my mind.
simple
compound
complex
The park was deserted and desolate after the police showed up.
simple
compound
complex
The vigilant reporter was always on the lookout for the next story.
simple
compound
complex
Even though I studied, I was apprehensive about the test.
simple
compound
complex
Her eyes were perpetually rolled, and eventually they just stayed that way forever.
simple
compound
complex
Sometimes people are skeptical of my ideas even though I'm definitely a genius.
simple
compound
complex
Not only does deforestation affect animals, it also affects us as humans.
Relative pronouns are as follows:
(that, which, who, whom or whose)
complex
Which of the following is NOT an example of a transitional word or phrase?
As an example
He said
Likewise
On the other hand
The main idea or underlying meaning of a literary work is its...
theme
personification
author's purpose
tone
The author's attitude conveyed by a piece of literature is...
theme
tone
author's purpose
main idea
When joining two sentences together, what goes before the subordinating conjunction?
comma
period
semicolon
colon
If I do not know a multiple choice answer, I should
Leave it blank,
it won't count against me
Read each answer, eliminate, and make the best guess
Make a pretty picture out of the bubbles
Dear Ms. Langston,
Ever since I hit your car in the parking lot last week, I've felt really bad. I know that my accident inconvenienced you and ruined your plans for a vacation. I hope that you can forgive me. From now on, I promise to be more careful when driving through a busy parking lot. Please let me know if there is anything I can do to help you or your family.
What is the tone of the letter?
A. affectionate
irreverent
scornful
apologetic
Dear Ms. Langston,
Ever since I hit your car in the parking lot last week, I've felt really bad. I know that my accident inconvenienced you and ruined your plans for a vacation. I hope that you can forgive me. From now on, I promise to be more careful when driving through a busy parking lot. Please let me know if there is anything I can do to help you or your family.
What is the tone of the letter?
A. affectionate
irreverent
scornful
apologetic
Me
I'm captain of the soccer team
And scored the winning goal.
I'm strong and smart and good at math
And I'm on the honor roll.
I have perfect, chiseled cheekbones,
And I dress the latest fads.
You can see my flawless, handsome face
On several TV ads.
This year, I won the talent show
And was homecoming king
And got the lead in the school play
And won lots of other things.
The girls think I'm the coolest guy.
My rank is understood.
Do you wonder why I always win?
It's cuz I'm just that good.
What is the tone of the poem?
arrogant
dejected
ashamed
respectful
The Chicago Cubs are a baseball team based in Chicago, Illinois. The team has a longer history than most other professional teams—including basketball, football, and hockey. What most sets them apart from other professional sports franchises, however, is that the Chicago Cubs have had the longest championship drought of any franchise in all professional sports. In fact, the last time the Chicago Cubs won a World Series was in 1908. They are often referred to as The Cubbies or as The Lovable Losers by their significant national fan following.
What is the purpose to the encyclopedia article above?
A. to persuade the reader that the Cubs are due for a championship
B. to entertain the reader with a story about a win less baseball team
C. to instruct the reader on how not to have a win less baseball season
D. to inform the reader about a historic, yet luckless, baseball team
A Boy with Dreams
by A. Gautam
Willy waited every night to wake up and turn into Batman.
He had the jaw that looked intimidating in a cowl,
and the perfect chin with a hint of toughness—
full lips—an embodiment of strength.
But he had the eyes of a poet—searching meaning,
and looking beyond what is seen.
When he looked at the city from his balcony,
he was learning to swim in the world—
growing up to be a man was tougher than it seemed.
He was a boy with dreams.
He wanted wings.
Which statement best describes the purpose of this passage?
A. It's a persuasive selection on how to sleep and dream.
B. It's an entertaining piece about a young boy's dreams.
C. It's an instructive work on how to live and dream big.
D. It's an informative article about a confused dreamer.
Want to stay healthy and help the Earth at the same time? On August 1, Trekkers will release the Ergo-Pack, an ergonomically designed backpack made from 100% recycled material. According to Trekkers' president Tamara Osteen, "At Trekkers, we are all about keeping kids healthy. That is why we are excited to release this one-of-a-kind product that kids will love. The Ergo-Pack will protect them while protecting the Earth.“ Osteen says that the Ergo-Pack was designed to answer an ongoing complaint of many parents—heavy backpacks causing severe back pain in children of all ages. The Ergo-Pack is specially designed to pull the weight off of the child's back by evenly distributing it so excess pressure is not put on the lower back and spine, which can cause pain and injury.
Which of the following statements best describes the purpose of this passage?
A. It entertains readers with a story about helping the environment.
B. It informs readers about the process of making the Ergo-Pack.
C. It persuades readers to learn how to protect their backs.
D. It advertises a product made by a luggage company to readers.
The fact is, teenagers who are still growing need 9 or 10 hours of uninterrupted sleep a night. Do most children get that much? It's highly unlikely. In the United States alone, an estimated 30% to 40% don't get adequate sleep. Most teenagers try to stay up later than they're allowed—to watch a favorite TV show or chat online. Parents often give in to the teenager's plea, and the cycle begins. The teen goes to sleep progressively later every night, and pretty soon, he or she is sleep deprived.
How does the underlined sentence help to advance the author's point of view?
A. The statistic makes it clear that most kids in the United States get plenty of sleep.
B. The statistic gives weight to the author's claim that kids don't get enough sleep.
C. The statistic is meant to show that sleep deprivation only affects a few people.
D. The statistic compares kids in the United States to those in other countries.
No travel destination can beat China for its fascinating history, from the mysterious dynasties of ancient times to the economic powerhouse it is today. Take a tour with Paradise Travel, and you'll be treated to a feast for the senses in the spectacular cities of Beijing, Shanghai, and others as you cruise the Yangtze River! Come experience for yourself China's fast-paced cities, eye-popping scenery, and polite and friendly people. Book now for supersaver tours that will fit any budget.
What is the author's purpose in writing this passage?
A. to convince readers to book a tour with Paradise Travel
B. to inform the audience about the history of China
C. to entertain readers with travel stories from far-off lands
D. to instruct readers in what sights they should see in China
ripple by Carl Sandburg
Once when I saw a cripple
Gasping slowly his last days with the white plague,
Looking from hollow eyes, calling for air,
Desperately gesturing with wasted hands
In the dark and dust of a house down in a slum,
I said to myself
I would rather have been a tall sunflower
Living in a country garden
Lifting a golden-brown face to the summer,
Rain-washed and dew-misted,
Mixed with the poppies and ranking hollyhocks,
And wonderingly watching night after night
The clear silent processionals of stars.
Which statement best describes the main theme of the poem?
A. Escape in nature's beauty.
B. Pity the unfortunate.
C. Take care of the disabled.
D. Life is like a sunflower.
ORME, Tennessee (Reuters) - A small town tucked away in the mountains of southern Tennessee is getting by on just a few hours of water a day. Its spring has run dry in the drought sweeping the Southeast. Each evening, residents wait for Mayor Tony Reames to make the short drive from his home up to a water tower on a wooded hill above the town to open a valve. When the water is flowing families can fill buckets and water jars, do laundry, take showers and wash dishes before the faucets run dry and they wait for the next evening. Resident Julie Hoover described Orme as a "hideaway" and a "piece of heaven." It was safe and everyone knew each other, but she said the water shortage had created serious problems.
Which best describes the main theme of this passage?
A. People need to remember the past.
B. People need to take shorter showers.
C. People need to try to resist change.
D. People need to adapt for survival.
Wherever he goes, the esteemed Dr. Sanchez is applauded for his life saving research. What does “esteemed” mean?
A. held over boiling water
B. very old
C. unable to chew gum
D. greatly admired
Most of America's Founding Fathers did not believe in women's suffrage. Only men could vote in the United states until 1920. What is “suffrage” ?
A. something that causes physical pain
B. an early flag
C. skirts that did not cover ankles
D. the right to vote
Some people are sure that the new health care law will mean better care for everyone. Others argue that the law will mean less care and longer waiting lines for those who need to see doctors. It's a controversy that will not go away soon. A controversy is something that people _______.
A. have strong disagreements over
B. blow their noses into
C. need to pay for a visit
D. eat with sweet candy
As the summer sun sent scattered rays through the maple and oak leaves overhead, the young deer stood frozen, making it almost impossible for the hikers to see her. In the above passage, the word “frozen” means _______
A. very cold
B. visible
C. not moving
D. not melted
Our new alarm system will wake up the entire neighborhood if an intruder gets in the house. An intruder is someone who intrudes. To intrude is to __________.
A. paint or repair old buildings
B. wear ones shoes on the wrong feet
C. go where one is not wanted or doesn't belong
D. be very noisy
If you don't curtail your spending, you'll be broke in no time at all! Which word is a synonym of "curtail"?
A. reduce
B. follow
C. behind
D. buy
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 2?
(2) Three hundred miles isn’t hardly that far, so you would probably expect the island to be home to the same sorts of plants and animals found on the mainland.
Change hardly to really
Delete so
Insert a comma after plants
No change should be made in this sentence.
How should sentence 5 be changed?
(5) How is it possible that such a unique island came into existense?
Change came to comes
Change existense to existence
Change the question mark to an exclamation point
Sentence 5 should not be changed.
What is the correct way to write sentences 23 and 24?
(23) Although many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct. (24) Scientists are still making discoveries.
Many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct, scientists, however, are still making discoveries.
Although many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct and scientists are still making discoveries.
Many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct, but there are scientists. Who are still making discoveries.
Although many of the species that once made their home on Madagascar are now extinct, scientists are still making discoveries.
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 30?
(30) It is a place that deserves protection, a true Oasis of life.
Change deserves to deserved
Delete the comma
Change Oasis to oasis
No change should be made in sentence 30.
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 2?
(2) In this environment it can be hard to stand out, especially if your relatively new.
Change environment to enviroment
Delete the comma
Change your to you’re
No change should be made in this sentence.
What change should be made in sentence 13?
(13) At my previous school, where I was president of the eighth-grade class I learned a lot about what it means to organize my time effectively.
Delete where
Insert a comma after class
Change a lot to alot
Change means to had meant
How should sentence 15 be changed?
(15) My experiences in the past will help me successfully manage everything that needs to be acomplished.
Change experiences to experience’s
Change will help to helped
Change acomplished to accomplished
Sentence 15 should not be changed.
What change should be made in sentence 22?
(22) It isn’t easy to represent a large class day after day but I know that I am up to the challenge.
Insert a comma after day after day
Change that to this
Change am to was
No change should be made in sentence 22.
What is the correct way to write sentence 26?
(26) In closing, I give you this solemn promise, if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.
In closing, I give you this solemn promise. That if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.
In closing, I give you this solemn promise: if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.
In closing, to give you this solemn promise: if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.
Sentence 26 is written correctly in the paper
The meaning of sentence 24 is unclear. The clarity of this sentence can be improved by changing They to —
(23) Hamm became an instant celebrity and the face of women’s soccer. (24) They lined up to have her endorse their products in advertisements. (25) In the most famous of these ads, Hamm challenged Michael Jordan to a series of sports contests, while the song “Anything You Can Do, I Can Do Better” played in the background.
Some advertisements
Various women
Sports companies
International faces
Fatima realizes she has offered a weak thesis in this paper. Which of the following could replace sentences 1 and 2 and provide a more effective thesis statement for Fatima’s paper?
(1) Mia Hamm is a soccer player who is fun to study. (2) She is an expert at the sport who has encouraged others to play
Mia Hamm is an interesting and fun personality, and I am grateful for this opportunity to research her story. I think that as you read my paper, you will agree that she has added great energy to women’s sports in this country and also to sports around the world.
Mia Hamm is one of the most celebrated female soccer players of all time and is an inspiration to young women everywhere. Her contributions to women’s soccer have had an unmistakable impact on the sport, both in the United States and internationally.
There is a soccer player in this country that is clearly more talented than all the rest. Her name is Mia Hamm, and she is an outstanding player and a model athlete who works hard to make sure she is always setting an example for other athletes and for the world at large.
If you don’t know Mia Hamm, you probably don’t know much. Many people say that she is the greatest soccer player of all time because she is so supremely committed to soccer and also to all that it means to herself and the other people of the world.
What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 14?
(14) And at the age of 17, she was playing for the University of North Carolina, where she helped her team win four NCAA championships and breaking many school records along the way.
And at the age of 17, she was playing for the University of North Carolina, she helped her team win four NCAA championships and broke many school records along the way.
And at the age of 17, she was playing for the University of North Carolina and won four NCAA championships and breaking many school records along the way, which helped her team.
And at the age of 17, she was playing for the University of North Carolina, which helped her team win four NCAA championships and breaking many school records along the way.
And at the age of 17, she was playing for the University of North Carolina, where she helped her team win four NCAA championships and broke many school records along the way.
- "Re-seeing" paper as whole
- Focus on organization, audience, development, & support
- Looking at stronger thesis statements, transitions, and clarity
Editing
Revising
- Focus on individual words and sentences
- Word choice, spelling, grammar, punctuation
- Comes after proofreading
Editing
Revising
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If I choose not to come on Tuesday, I will not have to take the STAAR test to graduate high school.
True
False
I need to bring a sack lunch on Tuesday.
True
False
Answer the following question based on this paragraph:
(1) Everyone has wants and needs that cost money. (2) Some people want the independence that comes with having a car, and some want the latest technology or the newest fashions. (3) Others need to help with the family finances. (4) Working during the school year might sound impossible because of school work and other activities. (5) Additionally, most students have three months without school, during which they could work. (6) Yet, since 1990, the number of teens with summer jobs has steadily declined year after year. (7) This means teens are not earning money for themselves and are not learning important life skills. (8) I plan to get a job this summer.
Justine would like to use a more appropriate transition in sentence 5. Which of the following is the best replacement for Additionally?
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