How would you correct the sentence below?

What would Robert think of our shabby Chinese Christmas.

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When I found out that my parents had invited the minister's family over for Christmas Eve dinner, I cryed.

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"You must be proud you are different. You're only shame is to have shame."

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Robert and his family waited patiently for platters to be passed to them.

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And even through I didn't agree with her then, I knew that she understood how much I had suffered during the evening's dinner.

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For christmas eve that year, she had chosen all my favorite foods.

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The kitchen was littered with appalling mounds of raw food.

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At the end of the meal my father leaned back and belched loudly, thanking my mother for her fine cooking.

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A howl soaking dried fungus back to life.

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What would he think of our noisy Chinese relatives who lacked proper American manners!

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"It's a polite Chinese custom to show you are satisfied," explained my father to our astonished guests.

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Thin my father poked his chopsticks just below the fish eye and plucked out the soft meat.

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Dinner through me deeper into despair.

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A slimy rock cod with bulging eyes that pleaded not to be thrown into a pan of hot oil.