WorksheetsWeek 27- Revising and Editing REVIEW
Total questions: 25
Worksheet time: 13mins
Complete the following sentence.
It is important to revise and edit my writing because...
What is true about stage directions?
Found in parenthesis ( ) or brackets [ ]
tells the actors how to act or feel
meant to be spoken out loud
What change needs to be made to this sentence?
First, they can swim faster than most shark species and will usually outrun a shark before experiencing to much damage.
Change than to then
Add a comma after species
Change usually to usualy
Change to to too
Gabby wants to add a transition at the beginning of sentence 20 to improve the connection to the previous sentence. Which transition should Gabby add to the beginning of sentence 20?
For this reason
In other words
In any case
At the same time
Mr. Moore builded those wooden benches in the corner.
Insert a comma after benches.
Delete the period after Mr
Change builded to built
Make no change
Which of the following is a "showing" detail?
It was fall.
It was August.
Leaves crunched beneath his feet.
It was pretty out.
A literary element that evokes certain feelings or vibes in readers through words and descriptions is...
Mood
Tone
Sensory details
Mystery
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?
Change violin to Violin
Insert a comma after boring
Change disagree to disagreeing
No change is needed.
How Animals Got Their Beautiful Coats Characters NARRATOR TORTOISE LEOPARD ZEBRA GIRAFFE HYENA ACT 1, SCENE 1
A forest in Africa (We see a forest with a dirt path running through the trees. There is a tiny hut at the left of the stage. Narrator walks out of the hut.) NARRATOR: (to the audience)
Sakubona. Welcome to my village. We Zulus are very careful about our looks. Even the animals in this land like to look their best. But this was not always true. Long ago, all the animals were a dull brown color. Hyena was not only dull but also mean. He liked to play tricks on smaller animals. Most of the animals were careful to stay away from Hyena. But Tortoise was a dreamer, and Hyena was often able to catch him by surprise. (Tortoise enters. He stops to look at a flower, then stares up into the sky. Hyena enters, sneaks up on Tortoise, and pushes him. Tortoise lands on his shell. His feet wave in the air.Hyena runs off laughing.)
TORTOISE: (frightened) Oh no! I am stuck!
LEOPARD: Calm down, little one. I’ll help you. TORTOISE: Oh, please hurry! (Leopard quickly lifts up Tortoise and puts him back on his feet.)
TORTOISE: Thank you for saving me! Please let me do something for you in return.
LEOPARD: (chuckling) What can a little tortoise like you do for a big leopard like me? TORTOISE: I can make you beautiful.
LEOPARD: Very well. I accept your offer. (Tortoise and Leopard exit.)
NARRATOR: Tortoise used flowers to make a silver-yellow paint and covered Leopard’s coat with it. Then he added a pattern of black rose-like spots from the top of Leopard’s head to the tip of his tail.
LEOPARD: (offstage) What lovely colors. Thank you, Tortoise!
ACT 1, SCENE 2 The forest, later that day (Leopard enters with his new fur. Zebra enters from the other direction. The two meet in the middle of the stage.)
ZEBRA: My, that is the most handsome coat in the forest! Where did you get it?
LEOPARD: Tortoise made it for me.
ZEBRA: I must find him. Maybe he’ll make one for me as well. (Tortoise enters. Zebra rushes over to him.) ZEBRA: Oh, Tortoise, Leopard’s coat is so beautiful. Please paint my fur, too.
TORTOISE: As you wish. (Tortoise and Zebra exit.) NARRATOR: Tortoise painted black and white stripes all over Zebra. He finished by painting Zebra’s hooves a shiny black. (Tortoise and Zebra enter. Zebra has new fur.) ZEBRA: (happily) These stripes will be perfect for hiding in the tall grass.
Lesson 6
(Zebra walks across the stage and meets Giraffe coming the other way.)
GIRAFFE: Oh, my! I have never seen such a wonderful coat. Where did you get it?
ZEBRA: (pointing at Tortoise) From Tortoise. If you ask him, he may paint your fur, too. (Giraffe runs over to Tortoise.) GIRAFFE: Zebra’s coat is amazing. Won’t you please do the same for me?
TORTOISE: (smiling) Of course! (Tortoise and Giraffe exit.) ACT 1, SCENE 3 The forest, the next morning (Giraffe is standing under a tree eating leaves. His new coat is cream colored with rich brown squares. Hyena walks up behind him.)
HYENA: (angrily) Where did you get that coat? GIRAFFE: From Tortoise. Do you like it?
HYENA: (rudely) I’d never wear it, but it fits you I suppose. Where is Tortoise? (Giraffe points to Tortoise and Hyena creeps toward him.)
HYENA: Give me beautiful fur or I’ll tip you over again. TORTOISE: (looking him over carefully) I think I see what will be best for you. (Tortoise begins to work on Hyena’s fur.) NARRATOR: Tortoise cut Hyena’s fur into different lengths. Some stood straight up, some lay down flat, and some went the wrong way. Then Tortoise mixed many colors together and splattered them all over Hyena. It was a good thing Hyena could not see himself when Tortoise was finished. His fur was a mix of dirty white, sad gray, and dull brown. He was the dullest-looking animal in Africa, and he is still that way today. His dull, messy coat lets everyone know he is a mean and unpleasant animal.
What is the most likely reason the author divides the play into 3 scenes?
To show time had passed
To show the setting changed
To introduce new characters
Because he wanted to
Which of the following is a "telling" detail?
She lifted her collar.
She tightened her scarf.
She was very cold.
She turned her face from the biting wind.
Which of the following is NOT a stage direction?
[Ghostly msic in auditorium]
[Cackle-voiced]
My name is Jacob Marley and I am dead.
[Pauses; remembers]
What is the correct way to write sentences 12 and 13?
(12) When she arrives, she usually has a box. (13) Containing dozens of t-shirts
and pants that have been donated by her friends and family.
When she arrives, she usually has a box, it is containing dozens of t-shirts and pants that have been donated by her friends and family.
When she arrives, she usually has a box containing dozens of t-shirts and
pants. That have been donated by her friends and family.
When she arrives, she usually has a box it contains dozens of t-shirts and pants that have been donated by her friends and family.
When she arrives, she usually has a box containing dozens of t-shirts and
pants that have been donated by her friends and family.
Edit this: "I want pizza," she says.
"I want pizza," she claims.
"I want pizza," she shouts.
"I want pizza," she said.
"I want pizza," she explains.
An extended or lengthy speech given by a character that expresses inner thoughts to himself and the audience
Aside
Monologue
Prologue
Soliloquy
What change should be made in sentence 5?
Change Friendships to Freindships
Change as to until
Change rehearse to will rehearse
Change you're to your
What is the correct way to write sentences 7 and 8?
All of the effort you invest in developing your skills is worth it. When you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.
All of the effort you invest in developing your skills is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.
All of the effort, you invest in developing your skills. Is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.
All of the effort you invest, in developing your skills is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.
Which verb tense is used in narrative writing?
Past (She ran towards the fire.)
Present (She runs towards the fire.)
Future (She will run towards the fire.)
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?
(6) Nowadays there are various professions that required speaking in multiple languages, especially english and spanish.
Change Nowadays to Now a days
Change various to varius
Change required to require
Change that to they
What is the correct way to write sentences 10 and 11?
(10) I was certain that I would slip and fall (11) And that all of
my cousins would laugh.
I was certain that I would slip and fall and that all of my
cousins would laugh.
I was certain that I would slip and fall all the of my cousins would laugh.
I was certain of one thing: I would slip and fall, and all of my cousins would laugh.
The sentences are written correctly in the paper.
Which part of the excerpt is a stage direction?
Lady Montague:
Try as I might, I simply cannot get this blessed melody right!
(pushing a strand of hair from her face wearily)
You are trying too hard, darling.
The attitude the writer takes towards a subject or an audience is...
Mood
Tone
Perspective
Narrator
What change should be made in sentence 5?
Change Bessemer's to Bessemers
Change invention to invension
Change rely to relied
Change iron to Iron
Yesterday I shouted “I really want to go to the park!”
Delete the quotation marks
Insert a comma after shouted
Change shouted to shout
Make no change
Although it took time, my teacher has taught me to write an expository essay correct.
Remove the comma after time
Change correct to correctly
Change to taught to teached
Make no change
The girl next to me in my class always cheat.
change girl to girl's
change cheat to cheats
change me to I
change my to mine
