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(3) But online networking promotes short, superficial connections. (4) It is very popular with teens today.
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 3 and 4?
But online networking, which is very popular with teens today, promotes short, superficial connections.
But online networking promotes short, superficial connections, it is very popular with teens today.
But online networking that promotes short, superficial connections, it is very popular with teens today.
But online networking promotes short, superficial connections with teens today, which it is very popular.
(9) A survey of almost 7,000 teens was conducted in 2014 by three Swiss researchers, and they found that many of the surveyed teens believed they were spending too much time on these social networking sites. (10) These teens are starting to realize that online connections can be anonymous, emotionless, and insignificant. (11) Additionally, these teens admitted that they miss spending time with real people. 12) Perhaps these teens are discovering what they have been suggesting for a while: spending time with others in real life is important.
How can Susan improve the clarity of sentence 12?
Change these teens to they
Change they to researchers
Change suggesting to saying
Change a while to some time
(16) Everyone communicates in person differently than communicating over the phone, through texting, or in online posts.
What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 16?
Everyone communicates in person in one way, they communicate in different ways over the phone, through texting, or in online posts.
Everyone communicates differently in person than they do when speaking over the phone, sending texts, or writing online posts.
Everyone communicates in person differently than they do over the phone, to send texts, or posting online.
Everyone communicates in person, over the phone, through texting, or in online posts differently.
(6) What caused these people to build an underground city in the Australian desert? (7) In 1915 14-year-old Willie Hutchison discovered some rich opal fields in the area. (8) After all, miners from all over the world flooded into the region to seek their fortunes.
Which transition should replace "After all" in sentence 8?
Soon
Instead
Finally
Otherwise
(20) To enhance their surroundings, fake windows with decorative drapes are installed by some people.
How should sentence 20 be revised?
To enhance their surroundings, installing fake windows and decorative drapes helped some people.
To enhance their surroundings, some people install fake windows and they also use decorative drapes.
To enhance their surroundings, fake windows with decorative drapes are installed by some people to help them.
To enhance their surroundings, some people install fake windows with decorative drapes.
(5) As students explore texts that were written hundreds of years before, you peer through a window into the world as it was in those days.
How should sentence 5 be changed?
Change explore to explored
Change were written to was written
Change years to year’s
Change you to they
(9) Being able to hear those voices from the past is a privilage young people should be grateful to have.
What change should be made in sentence 9?
Insert a comma after past
Change is to are
Change privilage to privilege
Change grateful to gratefull
(11) Most teens are absorbed with their own daily activities, they rarely think about the fact that human civilization has been around for a long time.
What is the correct way to write sentence 11?
Most teens are absorbed with their own daily activities. Rarely thinking about the fact that human civilization has been around for a long time.
Most teens are absorbed with their own daily activities and rarely think about human civilization. Which has been around for a long time.
Most teens are absorbed with their own daily activities and rarely think about this fact, human civilization has been around for a long time.
Most teens are absorbed with their own daily activities and rarely think about the fact that human civilization has been around for a long time.
(23) According to Philip Davis one of the English professors involved in the study, “Serious literature acts like a rocket-booster to the brain.”
How should sentence 23 be changed?
Change According to Acording
Insert a comma after Davis
Change Serious to serious
Sentence 23 should not be changed.
(6) With no instructions or guidence, Ortiz and his sister planned to take their new boats out onto the water
What change should be made in sentence 6?
Change With to Without
Change guidence to guidance
Delete the comma
Change planned to planning
(13) As a teen in the junior ranks, Ortiz became the first Mexican of any age to compete in the world freestyle kayak championships.
What change is needed in sentence 13?
A Change the comma after ranks to a semicolon
Change became to becomes
Insert a comma after age
Change world freestyle kayak championships to World Freestyle Kayak Championships
(24) On the day that he was supposed to paddle over Niagara Falls, he went to the top and looked down, he said that things just didn’t feel right.
What is the correct way to write sentence 24?
On the day that he was supposed to paddle over Niagara Falls. He went to the top, looked down, and said that things just didn’t feel right.
On the day that he was supposed to paddle over Niagara Falls, he went to the top and looked down. He said that things just didn’t feel right.
On the day that he was supposed to paddle over Niagara Falls, he went to the top and looked down. And said that things just didn’t feel right.
On the day that he was supposed to paddle. Over Niagara falls, he went to the top, looked down, and said things just didn’t feel right.
(27) He later explained that he just wasn’t confident he would be able to land the kayak safe.
What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 27?
Change explained to explains
Change confident to confidant
Change safe to safely
No change needs to be made in this sentence.
(32) “I am proud of Rafa’s decision,” he commented, and I think it is a great testament to his character and courage.”
What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 32?
Insert quotation marks before the first and
Change I think to we think
Change testament to testiment
No change needs to be made in sentence 32.
What is the best way to REVISE this sentence 2?
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?
What is the correct way to write the sentence above?
(1)One day at school I invited my friend over to spend the night. (2) Next, I ask my football coach if I could have the day off. (3) My friend and I will have a wonderful time. What transition word could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 3?
First
Suddenly
Lastly
Once
How can you change hero to a plural noun?
herois
heros
heroes
heroyes
How can you make picture into a plural noun?
picturees
pictureis
picturs
pictures
What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?
Grandma nonny was a very special lady.
change lady to Lady
change Grandma to grandma
change nonny to Nonny
no change needed
What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?
My favorite book in the entire world is harry potter.
change harry potter to Harry Potter
change harry potter to Harry potter
change harry potter to harry Potter
no change needed
We can ask directions. We can use a map.
The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike.
Which sentence below is written in the most effective way?
My own sister is having a hard time in math attending one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school.
My own sister attends one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school although she is having a hard time in math.
My own sister, who attends one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school, is having a hard time in math.
My own sister attends one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school, she is having a hard time in math.
What is the correct way to write the sentence below?
People feel safe when confiding in their pets; without being judgmental. A pet will often sit compassionately by its owner’s side for as long as is needed.
People feel safe when confiding in their pets, without being judgmental; a pet will often sit compassionately by its owner’s side for as long as is needed.
People feel safe when confiding in their pets. Without being judgmental, a pet will often sit compassionately; by its owner’s side, for as long as is needed.
People feel safe when confiding in their pets; without being judgmental, a pet will often sit compassionately by its owner’s side for as long as is needed.
What is the correct way to write the sentence below?
She promised her mother that she would succeed consequently, she walked the four-mile distance daily, between her home and school.
She promised her mother that she would succeed consequently she walked the four-mile distance daily between her home and school.
She promised her mother that she would succeed. Consequently, she walked; the four-mile distance daily between her home and school.
She promised her mother that she would succeed. Consequently, she walked the four-mile distance daily between her home and school.
(4) Clearly, having a pet is benefitial and can provide people with a healthier and happier life.
What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 4?
Change benefitial to beneficial
Insert a comma after people
Change healthier to healthiest
No change is needed in sentence 4
(5) This colorful reef and its many inhabitants create a spectacular sight. (6) The reef attracts millions of tourists every year.
What transition would be the most appropriate to use at the beginning of sentence 6?
As a matter of concern
For further evidence
To wipe away any doubt
For this reason among others
(1) They are continually telling us that we should become more involved in the community by volunteering our time.
This sentence is unclear. What change should she make in sentence 1 to clarify her introductory paragraph?
Change They to Teachers and leaders at our school
Change continually to always
Change telling us to instructing us
Change community to surrounding neighborhood
6) My own sister attends one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school. (7) She is having a hard time in math.
My own sister is having a hard time in math attending one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school.
My own sister attends one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school although she is having a hard time in math.
My own sister, who attends one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school, is having a hard time in math.
My own sister attends one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school, she is having a hard time in math.
(4) Clearly, having a pet is benefitial and can provide people with a healthier and happier life.
What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 4?
Change benefitial to beneficial
Insert a comma after people
Change healthier to healthiest
No change is needed in sentence 4
(9) People feel safe when confiding in their pets, without being judgmental, a pet will often sit compassionately by its owner’s side for as long as is needed.
What is the correct way to write sentence 9?
People feel safe when confiding in their pets; without being judgmental. A pet will often sit compassionately by its owner’s side for as long as is needed.
People feel safe when confiding in their pets, without being judgmental; a pet will often sit compassionately by its owner’s side for as long as is needed.
People feel safe when confiding in their pets. Without being judgmental, a pet will often sit compassionately; by its owner’s side, for as long as is needed.
People feel safe when confiding in their pets; without being judgmental, a pet will often sit compassionately by its owner’s side for as long as is needed.
(26) Small dogs that need minimal space are more appropriate, for people who have a small home or yard.
What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 26?
Change minimal to minamal
Change are to were
Delete the comma after appropriate
No change is necessary.
(30) As French poet Anatole France said, “until one has loved an animal, a part of one’s soul remains unawakened.”
What change should be made in sentence 30?
Change poet to Poet
Change until to Until
Change one’s to ones’
Change remains to remained
(8) She promised her mother that she would succeed, consequently she walked the four-mile distance daily between her home and school.
What is the correct way to write sentence 8?
She promised her mother that she would succeed consequently, she walked the four-mile distance daily, between her home and school.
She promised her mother that she would succeed consequently she walked the four-mile distance daily between her home and school.
She promised her mother that she would succeed. Consequently, she walked; the four-mile distance daily between her home and school.
She promised her mother that she would succeed. Consequently, she walked the four-mile distance daily between her home and school.
(10) Unfortunately, her limited funds have run out after only one year, and she was forced to return home.
What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 10?
Change have run to ran
Delete the comma after year
Change was forced to is forced
Make no change
(17) In September of 1921, Coleman, whom was now a proficient pilot, came back to the United States.
What change should Gena make in sentence 17?
Insert a comma after September
Change whom to who
Change proficient to proficiant
Change came to comes
(25) Tragically, during a Florida performance in 1926, Coleman died when her plane experienced a mechanical failure and crashed.
What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 25?
Insert a comma after performance
Change the comma after 1926 to a semicolon
Change mechanical to machanical
No change should be made
(28) Similar, a group of female African American pilots started the Bessie Coleman Aviators Club in 1977.
How does sentence 28 need to be changed?
Change Similar to Similarly
Change female to females
Change started to would start
Insert a comma after Club
Which of the following is a correctly punctuated sentence?
What change should be made in sentence 3?
(3) Leaves brush against your windows and the chirps of birds echo through your room.
Change Leaves to Leafes
Change brush to brushes
Insert a comma after windows
Change through to threw
What change should be made to sentence 18?
(18) In Sweden their is a tree house hotel that is shaped like a bird’s nest.
Change their to there
Insert a comma after hotel
Change shaped to shape
Change bird’s to birds
What is the correct way to write sentence 22?
(22) The Frio River Treetop is closer to home it is located near Leakey, Texas.
The Frio River Treetop is closer. To home, it is located near Leakey, Texas.
The Frio River Treetop is closer to home. It is located near Leakey, Texas.
The Frio River Treetop is closer to home as a result it is located, near Leakey, Texas.
No change is needed.
What is the correct way to write sentence 10?
(10) One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle and called a bubble ring it happens to be the perfect sea toy.
One kind of an air bubble is shaped like a circle and called a bubble ring. Happening to be the perfect sea toy.
One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle, and called a bubble ring. Then it happens to be the perfect sea toy.
One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle, called a bubble ring it happens to be the perfect sea toy.
One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle. It is called a bubble ring, and it happens to be the perfect sea toy.
How should sentence 11 be changed?
(11) Many Scientists have filmed and photographed dolphins playing with bubble rings.
Change Scientists to scientists
Insert a comma after filmed
Change playing to play
Change rings to ring
What is the best combination of the two sentences?
She wanted to go to prom and she never asked for permission.
She wanted to go to prom; never asked for permission
She wanted to go to prom but she never asked for permission.
Although she wanted to go to prom, she never asked for permission.
What change if any should be made to the sentence below?
I had always been fascinated with chemistry, biology, and math, but since those interest hadn't fit Tyson's definition of cool, I never pursued it.
Change fascinated to fisinated
Delete the comma after cool
Change had never pursued to hadn't never pursued
Change it to them
What change if any should be made in the question below?
The newly commissioned vessel was initially assigned to defend other U.S. ship's from pirate attacks.
Change commissioned to comissioned
Change ship's to ships
Change pirate to Pirate
Sentence 6 should not be changed
What change if any should be made in the sentence below?
Occasionaly, when we don't get what we want, something even better is waiting for us around the corner!
Change Occasionaly to Occasionally
Delete the comma after want
Change even better to even more better
No change needs to be made
What change if any should be made in the sentence below?
And in local elections sometimes less than 10 percent of the voting population chooses who will make them.
Change sometimes to there are times when
Change population to citizenry
Change chooses to selects
Change them to those important decisions
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 6 and 7?
(6) My own sister attends one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school. (7) She is having a hard time in math.
My own sister is having a hard time in math attending one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school.
My own sister attends one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school although she is having a hard time in math.
My own sister, who attends one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school, is having a hard time in math.
My own sister attends one of the elementary schools that feeds into our high school, she is having a hard time in math.
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 12 and 13?
(12) Amy Cuddy did a study on how “power poses” affect people. (13) She is a social psychologist at Harvard University.
Amy Cuddy did a study on how “power poses” affect people she is a social psychologist at Harvard University.
Amy Cuddy did a study on how “power poses” affect people, a social psychologist at Harvard University.
Amy Cuddy, a social psychologist at Harvard University, did a study on how “power poses” affect people.
Amy Cuddy did a study, at Harvard University and with a social psychologist, on how “power poses” affect people.
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 9 and 10?
(9) Some penguins would try to groom themselves. (10) They swallowed the toxic oil and died.
Some penguins would try to groom themselves because they swallowed the toxic oil and died.
Attempting to groom themselves were some penguins, who swallowed the toxic oil and died.
While attempting to groom themselves, some penguins swallowed the toxic oil and died.
Some penguins would try to groom themselves, they swallowed the toxic oil and died.
Which option is the best option to combine the two sentences below?
The students are quiet. The students are taking a test.
The students are quiet the students are taking a test.
The students are quiet, they are taking a test.
The students are quiet because, they are taking a test.
The students are quiet because they are taking a test.
The conjunction and is used to -
join two similar thoughts together
join two opposite or surprising thoughts together
show that you have choices
explain the reason that something happened
The conjunction but is used to -
join two similar thoughts together
join two opposite or surprising thoughts together
show that you have choices
explain the reason that something happened
The conjunction or is used to -
join two similar thoughts together
join two opposite or surprising thoughts together
show that you have choices
explain the reason that something happened
Fill in the blank in the sentence below with the best conjunction.
The tundra has many fish species, _____ millions of birds migrate there every year.
and
but
or
so
Fill in the blank in the sentence below with the best conjunction.
The ground in the tundra is permanently frozen, _____ some plants are still able to grow in the soil.
and
but
or
so
Choose the best conjunction to complete the sentence.
I could not go to the football game ___ I was sick.
although
because
unless
Choose the best conjunction to complete the sentence.
Our team cannot go to the finals ___ we win the playoffs.
although
when
unless
Choose the best COORDINATING CONJUNCTION to complete the sentence.
HINT: FANBOYS (For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So)
The spider could not move fast, ___ it had only seven legs instead of eight.
But
For
Or
So
Yet
Which of the following transition words shows a contrast?
Similarly,
However,
Obviously,
Therefore,
Which transition word is used to reveal a cause/effect relationship?
Similarly,
Therefore,
In conclusion,
Although...,
Do you want to order pizza?
Should I make spaghetti?
I wanted to play outside.
My mom said I have to do my homework first.
The students wanted to go out to recess. The teacher said they had too much work.
Which of these is the correct way to join two sentences:
After a few more questions and a breif pause, the quiz continued.
When I opened my present I let out a yell.
"It's to bad you were late to class," he said, "because I brought candy."
After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.
What is the most effective way to combine the 2 sentences?
Which of the following transition words shows a contrast?
Similarly,
However,
Obviously,
Therefore,
Which transition word is used to reveal a cause/effect relationship?
Similarly,
Therefore,
In conclusion,
Although...,
(5) Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions.
(6) So students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 5 and 6?
Since the schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions, students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions, students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
Drawing attending lines around subdivisions and student are attending school with those of similar economic backgrounds.
Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions and students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
Choose the correct sentence
Some penguins would try to groom themselves because they swallowed the toxic oil and died.
Attempting to groom themselves were some penguins, who swallowed the toxic oil and died.
While attempting to groom themselves, some penguins swallowed the toxic oil and died.
Some penguins would try to groom themselves, they swallowed the toxic oil and died.
Choose the correct sentence
The 11-year old also began writing a diary it detailed what was happening in her region of Pakistan.
The 11-year old also began writing a diary. With details what was happening in her region of Pakistan.
The 11-year old also began writing a diary that detailed what was happening in her region of Pakistan.
The sentence are written correctly in the paper.
Choose the correct sentence.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke, and it was obvious. That she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke it was obvious that she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke. Which made it obvious that she was no happier about the arrangement than I was.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke. It was obvious that she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.
Identify the run-on sentence.
I like learning English it makes me tired.
I like learning English, but it makes me tired.
I like learning English, even though it makes me tired.
I like learning English; it makes me tired.
Although I love dogs I would rather have a cat.
What is the main idea?
What change if any should be made to the sentence below?
He has given us hard math problems before, but this problem is the difficultest.
change hard to harder
change difficultest to most difficult
delete the comma
make no change
(1) Tara had to much cake last night. (2) She is sick to her stomach this morning.
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?
Change the period to a question mark.
Change had to has
Change to to too
Make no change
(14) The monkey’s swung through the trees. (15) One of them fell on the ground.
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 14?
Change monkey’s to monkeys
Change swung to swinged
Add a comma after swung
Make no change
Grandma and I are bakeing cookies for the carnival.
Which of these is the correct way to join two sentences:
After a few more questions and a breif pause, the quiz continued.
When I opened my present I let out a yell.
"It's to bad you were late to class," he said, "because I brought candy."
After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.
What is the most effective way to combine the 2 sentences?
Which of the following transition words shows a contrast?
Similarly,
However,
Obviously,
Therefore,
Which transition word is used to reveal a cause/effect relationship?
Similarly,
Therefore,
In conclusion,
Although...,
(5) Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions.
(6) So students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 5 and 6?
Since the schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions, students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions, students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
Drawing attending lines around subdivisions and student are attending school with those of similar economic backgrounds.
Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions and students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
Choose the correct sentence
Some penguins would try to groom themselves because they swallowed the toxic oil and died.
Attempting to groom themselves were some penguins, who swallowed the toxic oil and died.
While attempting to groom themselves, some penguins swallowed the toxic oil and died.
Some penguins would try to groom themselves, they swallowed the toxic oil and died.
Choose the correct sentence
The 11-year old also began writing a diary it detailed what was happening in her region of Pakistan.
The 11-year old also began writing a diary. With details what was happening in her region of Pakistan.
The 11-year old also began writing a diary that detailed what was happening in her region of Pakistan.
The sentence are written correctly in the paper.
Choose the correct sentence.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke, and it was obvious. That she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke it was obvious that she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke. Which made it obvious that she was no happier about the arrangement than I was.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke. It was obvious that she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.
Identify the run-on sentence.
I like learning English it makes me tired.
I like learning English, but it makes me tired.
I like learning English, even though it makes me tired.
I like learning English; it makes me tired.
Although I love dogs I would rather have a cat.
What is the main idea?
Which of these is the correct way to join two sentences:
After a few more questions and a breif pause, the quiz continued.
When I opened my present I let out a yell.
"It's to bad you were late to class," he said, "because I brought candy."
After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.
What is the most effective way to combine the 2 sentences?
Which of the following transition words shows a contrast?
Similarly,
However,
Obviously,
Therefore,
Which transition word is used to reveal a cause/effect relationship?
Similarly,
Therefore,
In conclusion,
Although...,
(5) Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions.
(6) So students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 5 and 6?
Since the schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions, students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions, students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
Drawing attending lines around subdivisions and student are attending school with those of similar economic backgrounds.
Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions and students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
Choose the correct sentence
Some penguins would try to groom themselves because they swallowed the toxic oil and died.
Attempting to groom themselves were some penguins, who swallowed the toxic oil and died.
While attempting to groom themselves, some penguins swallowed the toxic oil and died.
Some penguins would try to groom themselves, they swallowed the toxic oil and died.
Choose the correct sentence
The 11-year old also began writing a diary it detailed what was happening in her region of Pakistan.
The 11-year old also began writing a diary. With details what was happening in her region of Pakistan.
The 11-year old also began writing a diary that detailed what was happening in her region of Pakistan.
The sentence are written correctly in the paper.
Choose the correct sentence.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke, and it was obvious. That she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke it was obvious that she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke. Which made it obvious that she was no happier about the arrangement than I was.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke. It was obvious that she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.
Identify the run-on sentence.
I like learning English it makes me tired.
I like learning English, but it makes me tired.
I like learning English, even though it makes me tired.
I like learning English; it makes me tired.
Although I love dogs I would rather have a cat.
What is the main idea?
Which of these is the correct way to join two sentences:
After a few more questions and a breif pause, the quiz continued.
When I opened my present I let out a yell.
____ important to the robot to repair ____ circuits.
(5) Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions.
(6) So students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 5 and 6?
Since the schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions, students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions, students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
Drawing attending lines around subdivisions and student are attending school with those of similar economic backgrounds.
Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions and students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.
Choose the correct sentence.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke, and it was obvious. That she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke it was obvious that she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke. Which made it obvious that she was no happier about the arrangement than I was.
For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke. It was obvious that she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.
The girl was little.
She pressed her nose against the window.
The window was icy.
She giggled with delight.
She had never seen snow before.
Carla, and Bob weren't paying attention to the teacher.
They couldn't do their homework.
The deer head up ears alert listened for danger.
"This, ladies and gentlemen," Mr. Taylor announced, "Will be a formative grade."
After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.
"Of course I'll follow you on Instagram," she replied sarcastically.
What change, if any, should be made in the sentence?
What is the correct way to write the sentence?
Which sentence is written correctly?
They were navigating huge piles of trash that had washed up on the shore.
They were navigating trash, huge piles of it had washed up on the shore.
