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Total questions: 16
Worksheet time: 32mins
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3. What is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 3?
a)
A In those times, proper etiquette was highly valued mainly during meals.
b)
B In those times, proper etiquette during meals was highly valued.
c)
C In those times, it was highly valued proper etiquette during meals.
2.
4. The meaning of sentence 4 is unclear. Which word should replace it in the sentence?
a)
A tables
b)
B forks
c)
C knives
d)
D food
3.
5. What is the MOST effective revision to make in sentence 3?
a)
A Deciding which method to use depends on your fitness level and desired outcome.
b)
B Deciding which method to use will depend on you and your fitness level and you and your desired outcome.
c)
C Deciding on which method to use depends on your fitness level, and it will depend on your desired outcome.
4.
9. What is the MOST effective revision to make in sentence 1?
a)
A As I frantically rummaged through the clutter of my messy bedroom, my heart raced with a sense of overwhelming panic.
b)
B As I frantically rummaged, my heart raced through the clutter of my messy bedroom with a sense of overwhelming panic.
c)
C As I frantically rummaged with a sense of overwhelming panic through the clutter of my messy bedroom, my heart raced.
5.
10. Simon has included a redundant sentence. Which sentence should be deleted from this paragraph?
a)
A Sentence 3
b)
B Sentence 4
c)
C Sentence 5
d)
D Sentence 6
6.
11. What is the MOST effective revision to make in sentence 3?
a)
A I knew that my mother, and for a good reason, would be seething with anger if I were to lose the eyeglasses.
b)
B I knew that my mother would be seething with anger if I were to lose the eyeglasses, and for a good reason.
c)
C I knew that if I were to lose it, my mother would be seething with anger about the eyeglasses, and for a good reason.
7.
1. The word sudden is not the most effective and descriptive word in sentence 6. Select the word that should replace sudden.
"Every now and then, it's the ____________ accidents that impart a painting with something truly unique."
a)
unknown
b)
startling
c)
unforeseen
d)
anticipated
8.
2. What is the BEST way to revise sentence 9?
a)
A It became apparent mistakes are to me sometimes a disguised gift.
b)
B It became apparent to me that sometimes gifts are disguised mistakes.
c)
C It became apparent to me that sometimes mistakes are a disguised gift.
d)
D No change is needed.
9.
3. The meaning of sentence 5 is unclear. Which word should replace they in the sentence?
a)
A Lovers of games
b)
B Creative people
c)
C Game players
d)
D Board game designers
10.
4. Layla has included a redundant sentence. Which sentence should be deleted from this paragraph?
a)
A Sentence 1
b)
B Sentence 2
c)
C Sentence 3
d)
D Sentence 4
11.
5. What is the BEST way to revise sentence 3 to avoid repeating ideas?
a)
A However, it is worth it when you decide the fulfillment has happened.
b)
B However, the fulfillment that comes with improving your skills makes it worth it.
c)
C However, with fulfillment, you often improve your skills, and it is worth it.
12.
8. What is the MOST effective revision to make in sentence 2?
a)
A I am contacting you today for the English Language Arts paper regarding the deadline that is due tomorrow.
b)
B I am contacting you today regarding the deadline for the English Language Arts paper that is due tomorrow.
c)
C I am contacting you today regarding the deadline since I must submit tomorrow the English Language Arts paper.
13.
1. Mélisande would like to add a topic sentence to her paragraph. Which of the following sentences should be added before sentence 1 to accomplish this goal?
a)
A Did you know fresh air is important for people to look for?
b)
B There are some health benefits to fresh air.
c)
C Fresh air is one of the most important things we need for good health.
14.
2. What change should be made in sentence 5?
a)
A Change They to You
b)
B Change of to for
c)
C Insert a comma after outside
d)
D Change in to at
15.
3. What change should be made in sentence 2?
a)
A Delete the comma after arrived
b)
B Change took to take
c)
C Change Lady Bird lake to Lady Bird Lake
d)
D Change their to they’re
16.
4. The author forgot to include this sentence in the paragraph.
The flurry of activity on the water quickly captured Odette's attention, from kayaking to stand-up paddleboard yoga.
Where is the BEST place to insert this sentence?
a)
A After sentence 2
b)
B After sentence 3
c)
C After sentence 4
d)
D After sentence 5
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