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Total questions: 21
Worksheet time: 35mins
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Class
Date
1.
(1) I was sad to go home from the Christmas party. (2) As we drove up to our house, though, I am excited to see that my dad put up our Christmas lights and wreaths!
What is the best way to REVISE this sentence 2?
What is the best way to REVISE this sentence 2?
a)
As we drove up to our house, though, I was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.
b)
As we drove up to our house, though, we was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.
c)
As we drove up to our house, though, I be excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.
d)
As we drive up to our house, though, we was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.
2.
The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere.
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?
a)
delete the comma after cactus
b)
change everywhere to every where
c)
change dessert to desert
d)
make no change
3.
The teacher was helpfull and showed the student how to work the difficult math problem.
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?
a)
add a comma before and
b)
change helpfull to helpful
c)
insert a comma after difficult
d)
no change is needed
4.
Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different board games to play!
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?
a)
Change me and my brother to my brother and I
b)
change lots to lot's
c)
change there to their
d)
no change is needed
5.
20 million people almost visit Disney World each year.
What is the correct way to write the sentence above?
What is the correct way to write the sentence above?
a)
20 million people visit Disney World almost each year.
b)
Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year.
c)
20 million people visit Disney World each year, almost.
d)
No change is needed
6.
(1) I was sad to go home from the Christmas party. (2) As we drove up to our house, though, I am excited to see that my dad put up our Christmas lights and wreaths!
What is the best way to REVISE this sentence 2?
What is the best way to REVISE this sentence 2?
a)
As we drove up to our house, though, I was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.
b)
As we drove up to our house, though, we was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.
c)
As we drove up to our house, though, I be excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.
d)
As we drive up to our house, though, we was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.
7.
The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere.
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?
a)
delete the comma after cactus
b)
change everywhere to every where
c)
change dessert to desert
d)
make no change
8.
The teacher was helpfull and showed the student how to work the difficult math problem.
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?
a)
add a comma before and
b)
change helpfull to helpful
c)
insert a comma after difficult
d)
no change is needed
9.
20 million people almost visit Disney World each year.
What is the correct way to write the sentence above?
What is the correct way to write the sentence above?
a)
20 million people visit Disney World almost each year.
b)
Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year.
c)
20 million people visit Disney World each year, almost.
d)
No change is needed
10.
Mom surprised us all when she declared, "let's all go get pizza!"
a)
Delete the quotation marks
b)
Change let's to Let's
c)
Remove the comma after declared
d)
The sentence is correct.
11.
Joseph said he knew his uncles had thrown a party for theirselves.
a)
Change knew to new
b)
Change thrown to threw
c)
Change theirselves to themselves
d)
No change is needed.
12.
The Pledge of Allegiance is an important part of our monday morning assembly.
a)
Change important to more important
b)
Change an to a
c)
Change monday to Monday
d)
The sentence is correct
13.
Why did the little puppy dog lick its sore paw.
a)
Change its to it's
b)
Change sore to soar
c)
Change puppy to puppey
d)
Change the period to a question mark
14.
(1)One day at school I invited my friend over to spend the night. (2) Next, I ask my football coach if I could have the day off. (3) My friend and I will have a wonderful time. What transition word could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 3?
a)
First
b)
Suddenly
c)
Lastly
d)
Once
15.
How can you change hero to a plural noun?
a)
herois
b)
heros
c)
heroes
d)
heroyes
16.
How can you make picture into a plural noun?
a)
picturees
b)
pictureis
c)
picturs
d)
pictures
17.
What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?
Grandma nonny was a very special lady.
a)
change lady to Lady
b)
change Grandma to grandma
c)
change nonny to Nonny
d)
no change needed
18.
What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?
My favorite book in the entire world is harry potter.
a)
change harry potter to Harry Potter
b)
change harry potter to Harry potter
c)
change harry potter to harry Potter
d)
no change needed
19.
Choose the best conjunction to join the sentence pair.
We can ask directions. We can use a map.
We can ask directions. We can use a map.
a)
and
b)
but
c)
or
d)
because
20.
The following sentence pair should be combined to make a better sentence. Which is the best revision?
The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike.
The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike.
a)
The bicycle tire is on the bike and the bicycle tire is flat.
b)
The flat bicycle tire is on the bike.
c)
On the bike, the bicycle tire there is flat.
d)
The tire on the bicycle is flat.
21.
Choose the best conjunction to combine the sentence pair: We can drive to San Francisco. We can take an airplane.
a)
and
b)
but
c)
or
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