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Searching the Internet, she found Dudley listed for sale.

She searched the Internet, she found Dudley listed for sale.

Searching the Internet was where she found Dudley for sale.

No revision is needed in sentence 17.

The exercise was regular and the diet was strict, Dudley grew trim and sleek, and he was able to make the first cut.

With regular exercise and a strict diet, Dudley grew trim and sleek; he was able to make the first cut.

The regular exercise and strict diet that caused Dudley to grow trim and sleek was able to make the first cut.

With regular exercise the diet was strict, so Dudley grew trim and sleek; he was able to make the first cut.

calm

friendly

reasonable

open

As the son of Zeus and Diamond, Dudley was proud of his heritage.

The plain little colt had finally become the horse he had been bred to be.

He was ready to move back to the McGee ranch and be with his family again.

Dudley would never be the horse that people had hoped for, but he was still special.

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Change comes to come

Change fawcet to faucet

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Change contributions to contribution's

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Change there to their

Len Fisher is a scientist who has made a career out of researching ordinary things in life.

Len Fisher, a scientist making a career out of researching ordinary things in life.

Len Fisher is a scientist. Who has made a career out of researching ordinary things in life.

Sentence 6 is written correctly in the paper.

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Change teams' to teams

No change needs to be made.

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Change caused to causing

Change then to than

No change should be made.

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Change and to this

Change them to it

Sentence 20 should not be changed.

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Change good to well

Make no change

Of course, there are people who argue that researching frivolous things like cookie dunking is a waste of time and money.

Of course, there are people who argue that researching frivolous things like cookie dunking. It is a waste of time and money.

Of course, there are people they argue that researching frivolous things like cookie dunking is a waste of time and money.

The sentences are written correctly in the paper.

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Change frequently to freqently

Change dry cleaners to Dry Cleaners

No change should be made.

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Change efficiency to efficiently

Change automated to automatted

No change needs to be made in this sentence.

Change came to coming

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Change was to were

Sentence 14 should not be changed.

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Insert quotation marks at the end of the sentence

No change needs to be made.

An hour later we had designs and sketches for a robot. Which could out-babysit any teenager!

An hour later we had designs and sketches, they were for a robot that could out-babysit any teenager!

An hour later we had designs and sketches. For a robot that could out-babysit any teenager!

An hour later we had designs and sketches for a robot that could out-babysit any teenager!

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Change Lucy and I to me and Lucy

Change headed to head

No change should be made in sentence 24.

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We went straight to our room, we crumpled up our robot diagrams and tossed the paper wads into the trash.

We went straight to our room, crumpled up our robot diagrams, and tossed the paper wads into the trash.

We went straight to our room, and we crumpled up our robot diagrams we tossed the paper wads into the trash.

The sentences are written correctly in the paper.

More interesting, however, is why everything about the scraggly little dog was stubby.

More interesting, however, is that Stubby was both unusual and popular during World War I.

More interesting, however, is how this little dog earned the rank of U.S. Army sergeant and became a war hero.

More interesting, however, is how Stubby was able to keep the name for so very long.

While training on a Connecticut field, Conroy found a stray dog that won his heart.

He was training on a Connecticut field because he found a stray dog that won his heart.

Training on a Connecticut field, a stray dog that he found won Conroy’s heart.

He was training on a Connecticut field, there, Conroy found a stray dog that won his heart.

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Change the German language to it

Change him to a German spy

Change the man’s to his

Although Stubby had been wounded, he was still a friendly, cheerful dog.

Fortunately, the dog had earned a high rank during the war.

It wasn’t long before Stubby was on the battlefields of Europe.

After about 18 months, Sergeant Stubby and Conroy returned to the United States together.

He was the first dog to ever earn a rank in any branch of the U.S. armed forces.

He became the mascot for the university’s football team, entertaining the crowd by pushing the ball around the field with his nose.

During his war service, Stubby was reported to be sensitive to even a small trace of gas.

Georgetown University, located in Washington, D.C., was founded in 1789 and is a privateinstitution.

I think students are entirely too busy.

I hope that the principal will take the time to listen to a student suggestion.

A flex period is something I would like to talk about in this paper.

I propose that students get a “flex” period three days a week.

There are so many days when I could use some extra time to finish up homework.

The seventh-grade science teacher assigned a large packet for students to finish last week.

Those needing extra help could work with volunteers or student tutors.

If a student wanted a chance to talk on the phone or play games, this wouldn’t be the right time.

A flex period would allow these students to get some homework done in school, this would relieve some of the pressure they feel in the after-school hours.

A flex period would allow these students who get some homework done in school to relieve some of the pressure when they would feel it in the after-school hours.

A flex period would allow these students to get some homework done in school or would relieve some of the pressure and feel of the after-school hours.

A flex period would allow these students to get some homework done in school, which would relieve some of the pressure they feel in the after-school hours.

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Change expressed to shared

Change concern to worry

Change the current middle school schedule to it

Mrs. Holister tries to help me and move on with the lesson for the rest of the class who understand.

Mrs. Holister tries to help me, but once the rest of the class understands, she has to move on with the lesson.

Mrs. Holister tries to help me, once the rest of the class understands, she has to move on with the lesson.

Mrs. Holister tries to help the rest of the class, who understands, then she has to move on with the lesson.

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Change todays’ to today’s

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Change announced to announsed

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Change Contains to contains

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Change prepare to prepared

Change breif to brief

Change its to it’s

Delete When

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Change I let out to and let out

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I jotted down some notes about the word’s origin along with a couple of example sentences. Sure that the rest of the report would be a breeze.

I jotted down some notes about the word’s origin. Which along with a couple of example sentences meant that the rest of the report would be a breeze.

I jotted down some notes about the word’s origin along with a couple of example sentences. The rest of the report would be a breeze.

The sentence is written correctly in the paper.

Change Confidently to Confidentally

Change approaching to approach

Change the first comma to a period

Change allowed to aloud

Change seems to seemed

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Change from to it was from

No change needs to be made.

Delete the quotation marks after the comma

Change he to He

Change irruption to eruption

No change is needed in sentence 34.

Add, Reassemble, Motivate, Subtract, Conjugate, Usage, Pronounce, Speak

Add, Remove, Move, Substitute, Capitalization, Usage, Punctuation, Spelling

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Read question and mark text.

Identify 2 throw away answers and 1 distractor.

Use the dictionary to double check spelling.

Only write the correct answer in the book. There should be no extra marks.

If your instinct is telling you the answer is right, don't second guess yourself.

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Are you really asking me this?

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False

My teacher believes in me too.

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