Commas in a series and Parallelism

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April got a sterling silver bracelet for her birthday.

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April got a sterling, silver bracelet for her birthday.

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Recording star has a large devoted fan club.

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The recording, star has a large, devoted fan club.

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Tall lanky outfielder = powerful hitter.

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The tall lanky outfielder is a powerful hitter.

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The mayor threw out the traditional, first pitch.

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The mayor threw out the traditional, first pitch.

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Dad has several old valuable stamps in his collection.

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Dad has several, old, valuable, stamps in his collection.

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Mowing the lawn on a hazy hot humid day was no fun.

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Mowing the lawn on such a hazy hot humid day was no fun.

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Bring pretzels, salad, or soda to the picnic?

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Bring pretzels salad or soda to the picnic.

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Robert lifted weights, rode a bicycle, and did push-ups.

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Robert lifted weights rode a bicycle, and did push-ups.

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Good exercises include bike riding, brisk walking, and swimming.

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Bike riding, brisk walking, and swimming are good exercise.

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Ironing a clean shirt, __________, and buying gum were tasks Aaron completed.

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printing a course schedule.