Commas

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As I watched friends find dates for homecoming, I was initially a little discouraged. It looked as though my first homecoming dance would be missing a key character.

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(8) So several of my dateless friends and me banded together and decided to go as a big group.

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Change me to I

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What change should be made to the sentence: "I didn’t have to stick with one specific person, I was free to mingle and dance with anyone I wanted to!"? Options: Change one specific to no specific, Change the comma to a semicolon, Insert a comma after mingle, Make no change.

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Change the comma to a semicolon

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The 11-year-old also began writing a diary that detailed what was happening in her region of Pakistan.

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She wanted to help right societies wrongs, especially the denial of a woman’s right to an education.

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Change societies to society's

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What is the most effective way to combine sentences 12 and 13? Options:

Amy Cuddy did a study on how “power poses” affect people she is a social psychologist at Harvard University.

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Amy Cuddy did a study on how “power poses” affect people, a social psychologist at Harvard University.

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Amy Cuddy, a social psychologist at Harvard University, did a study on how “power poses” affect people.

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Amy Cuddy did a study, at Harvard University and with a social psychologist, on how “power poses” affect people.

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Amy Cuddy, a social psychologist at Harvard University, did a study on how “power poses” affect people.

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She found that the people holding their body in a position of power had an increase in the hormone associated with dominance and a decrease in the hormone associated with stress.

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What change should be made in the sentence: "It just comes with the territory, especially when you have an older brother, who is the epitome of 'cool.'"?

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No change should be made.

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What change should be made to sentence 5?

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No change needs to be made in sentence 5.

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What is the correct change in the sentence: "I had always been fascinated with chemistry, biology, and math, but since those interests hadn’t fit Tyson’s definition of cool, I had never pursued it."? Options: Change fascinated to fasinated, Delete the comma after cool, Change had never pursued to hadn’t never pursued, Change it to them.

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Change it to them.