M1 EOM Peer Review

M1 EOM Peer Review

Our learning goals today...

• Have your rough draft ready.

• Make sure each criteria is included into your story.

• Peer read and review today.

• Ask teacher questions to help meet the criteria.

• Write your final to submit tomorrow.

Criteria to include

• Dialogue between characters.

• You used descriptive language and/or sensory language in your story.

• You story is during the middle ages.

• You must have a resolution at the end.

• Sequencing plot - story make sense

• 3 vocabulary words included

• Check your spelling and grammar

Dialogue

When characters talk to each other...

Sensory language/Descriptive language

Describing your senses and making things seem real for the reader.

Set it during the middle ages

How can we tell it is in the middle ages?

Middle ages

• Castles, small stick houses, and there are not big buildings.

• Horses and wagons (no cars)

• Clothing is much different during this era.

• The way they speak is different than today.

• Think about their hygiene and life style (jobs)

Vocabulary words to use

• Hierarchy

• Genteel

• Daintily

• Perspective

• Patriarchy

• Fervently

• Pilgrimage

Sequencing

How you write your stories events from what happened first, next, after, Then, and lastly.

Vocabulary words to use

• Coyly

• Greedily

• Chivalrous

• Shortage

Peer Review Time...

Write your story using this criteria. Share your stories or ideas with your peers.

You must write your EOM FINAL paper tonight and tomorrow and it is due by 11:59 pm on Tuesday 11/10/20

Asynchronous day tomorrow!