Revising Sentences

Revising Sentences

Ms. Chacon

Read the following selection, Cat Cafés and answer the questions that follow!

Great Job Reading! Now it's time for some questions!

Multiple Choice

What change should be made to sentence 2?

• change "there" to "their"

• change "isn't" to "is"

• change "them" to "it"

• change "closely" to "closer"

Multiple Choice

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 8?

• change "is" to "are"

• change "made" to "making"

• change "especially" to "especialy"

• No change is needed.

Multiple Choice

What is the correct way to write sentence 11?

• Cat Cafes are exactly what the name suggests, being coffee shops that feature real, live cats.

• Cat Cafes are exactly what the name suggests: being coffee shops that feature real, live cats.

• Cat Cafes are exactly what the name suggests, being coffee shops that feature real, live cats.

• Cat Cafes are exactly what the name suggests. Being coffee shops that feature real, live cats.

Multiple Choice

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 16?

• change "cat section" to "Cat Section"

• change "customers" to "customer's"

• change "friskyness" to "friskiness"

• sentence 16 should not be changed

Multiple Choice

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 18?

• change the comma to a colon

• insert "never" before "allow"

• change "your" to "their"

• No change needs to be made in this sentence.

Multiple Choice

What is the correct way to write sentences 23 and 24?

• Cat cafes are relatively new to America but have been popular. In other areas of the world for some time.

• Cat cafes are relatively new to America and have been popular in other areas. Of the world for some time.

• Cat Cafes are relatively new to America, but they have been popular in other areas of the world for some time.

Multiple Choice

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 27?

• Change "lived to "live"

• Insert a comma after "room"

• Change "properly" to "proper"

• No change is needed in sentence 27

Multiple Choice

How should sentence 32 be changed?

• Change "parlour" to "Parlour"

• Change "advance" to "advanced"

• Change "large" to "larger"

• Sentence 32 should not be changed.