Guided writing L4

Guided writing L4

You were waiting for your friend at a park when you heard a shout. You turned towards the voice and were alarmed by what you saw.

Write an essay based on the situation given.

For your composition, make use of the following point:

• what did you see

• what were the reactions of the other people who were around

• what happened in the end

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• Describe what you were doing (sitting, waiting, checking your phone)

• Describe what you saw, what you heard (someone shouted, who was it? what was happening?)

• Describe your reactions (startled, scared, heart pounding, sweating, etc)

Open Ended

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• What did you do?

• What were other people's reactions? (the victim, the perpetrator, the public, your friend)

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Open Ended

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• What happened at the end?

• Did you save someone? Did the police come? Did you help someone? Did your friends come? Did the perpetrator escape?

• How did you feel? How did the victim feel?

• How does the incident affect your future reactions and actions?

Open Ended

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