Pie Chart 2

Pie Chart 2

TEACHER : TRAN NGUYEN THUY VY

​I. SAMPLE ANALYSIS

​You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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The pie charts below compare the water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Write at least 150 words.

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What is water mainly used for in San Diego,

in California,

and in the rest of the world?

What are the graphs mainly about?

​The pie charts give information about the water used for residential, industrial and agricultural purposes in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.

What is water mainly used for in San Diego, in California, and in the rest of the world?

Water is mainly used for residential purpose in San Diego County and in California. However, in the rest of the world, it is mainly used for agricultural purpose.

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What is water least used for in San Diego, in California, and in the rest of the world?

What is water least used for in San Diego, in California, and in the rest of the world?

Water is least used for agriculture purpose in SanDiego County and in California, and for residential purpose in the rest of the world.

What information would you include in detail paragraph 1 and detail paragraph 2?

Detail para 1: ___________ and ___________ water consumption in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.

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Detail para 2: ___________ water consumption in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.

What information would you include in detail paragraph 1 and detail paragraph 2?

Detail para 1: residential and agricultural water consumption in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.

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Detail para 2: industrial water consumption in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.

INTRODUCTION

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The pie charts give information about the water used for (1) ________, (2) _________ and (3) _________ purposes in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.

The pie charts give information about the water used for (1) ________, (2) _________ and (3) _________  purposes in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.

1. residential

2. industrial

3. agricultural

OVERVIEW

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It is noticeable that more water is (4) __________ by homes than by industry or agriculture in the two American regions. (5) _____________, agriculture

accounts for the vast majority of water used worldwide.

It is noticeable that more water is (4) __________ by homes than by industry or agriculture in the two American regions. (5) _____________, agriculture accounts for the vast majority of water used worldwide.

4. consumed

5. By contrast/In contrast

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In San Diego County and California State, residential water consumption (6) __________ 60% and 39% of total water usage. By contrast, (7) _______ 8% of the water used globally goes to homes. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at water consumption for agriculture. This accounts for (8) _________ 69% of global water use, but only 17% and 28% of water usage in San Diego and California (9) ____________.

In San Diego County and California State, residential water consumption (6) __________ 60% and 39% of total water usage. By contrast, (7) _______ 8% of the water used globally goes to homes. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at water consumption for agriculture. This accounts for (8) _________ 69% of global water use, but only 17% and 28% of water usage in San Diego and California (9) ____________.

6. accounts for/makes up/comprises/constitutes

7. a mere

8. a massive

9. respectively

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Such (10) ____________ are not seen when we compare the figures for industrial water use. The same proportion of water (23%) is used by industry in San Diego and worldwide, while the figure for California is 10% higher, at 33%.

Such (10) ____________ are not seen when we compare the figures for industrial water use. The same proportion of water (23%) is used by industry in San Diego and worldwide, while the figure for California is 10% higher, at 33%.

10. dramatic differences

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Underline all the comparisons used in the sample. What type of comparison are they?

​Underline all the comparisons used in the sample. What type of comparison are they?

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- More water is consumed by homes than by industry or agriculture in the two American regions. => So sánh hơn

- Agriculture accounts for the vast majority of water used worldwide. => So sánh nhất

- The same proportion of water (23%) is used by industry in San Diego and worldwide, while the figure for California is 10% higher, at 33%. => So sánh hơn

​*Structure 3: Đưa ra số liệu, so sánh với 1 nhóm khác

Đối với nhóm cấu trúc này, người viết cần triển khai 2 vế câu:

vế thứ nhất là một mệnh đề hoàn chỉnh để nêu ra số liệu của một đối tượng trong bài, vế thứ hai có thể là một mệnh đề hoặc cụm từ để đưa ra sự so sánh với một đối tượng khác.

Ex:

- In 2004, the cost per kilolitre of water in Brisbane was 0.81 dollars, compared to only 0,42 dollars in Adelaide.

- Each kilolitre of water in Brisbane cost 0.81 dollars in 2004, while the cost in Adelaide was only 0.42 dollars.

- People in Brisbane had to pay 0.81 dollars per kilolitre of water in 2004, higher than the cost in Adelaide by nearly 0.4 dollars.

- The cost of water in Brisbane was 0.81 dollars per kilolitre, about twice as much as the amount in Adelaide.

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Rewrite the following sentence so that it remains the same meaning.In San Diego, 60% of water use goes to homes, compared to 39% in California.

​In San Diego, 60% of water use goes to homes, compared to 39% in California.

​=> In San Diego, 60% of water use goes to homes, while the figure for California is 39%.

=> In San Diego, residential water consumption makes up 60% of water use, 21% higher than that in California.

=> In San Diego, the water used for residential purpose constitutes 60% of water consumption, 1.5 time as much as that in California.

*Structure 4: So sánh số liệu tổng quan, đưa ra dẫn chứng

Đối với nhóm cấu trúc này, người viết cần đưa ra sự so sánh tổng quan của 2 nhóm số liệu ở một vế câu (chưa đưa số liệu cụ thể), sau đó sử dụng một vế câu tiếp theo để nêu ra số liệu cụ thể cho sự so sánh ở vế trước đó (vế thứ 2 cần phải đặt trong dấu ngoặc hoặc sau dấu phẩy vì đây là thành phần bổ nghĩa, không phải thành phần chính trong câu).

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Rewrite the following sentence so that it remains the same meaning.

In San Diego, 60% of water use goes to homes, compared to 39% in California.

​In San Diego, 60% of water use goes to homes, compared to 39% in California.

=> The percentage of water used for households in San Diego is significantly higher than that in California, at 60% and 39% respectively.

=> Households in San Diego consume significantly more water than those in California (60% compared to 39% of total water use).

STRUCTURE WITH “RESPECTIVELY”

“Respectively” sentence: để tránh việc lặp đi lặp lại câu miêu tả số liệu của một nhân tố trong biểu đồ. Respectively có thể dùng với nghĩa là “lần lượt là”. Lưu ý khi dùng respectively:

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- Số lượng số liệu phải bằng số lượng danh từ

- Số liệu nào đứng trước thì danh từ của số liệu đó phải đứng trước

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Ex: In 2008, the percentage of owners who used smartphones to play games and watch TV was 63 and 50, respectively.

TRANSLATE

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Nhiều nước được tiêu thụ bởi các hộ gia đình hơn là ngành công nghiệp hoặc nông nghiệp ở hai khu vực nước Mỹ.

Nhiều nước được tiêu thụ bởi các hộ gia đình hơn là ngành công nghiệp hoặc nông nghiệp ở hai khu vực nước Mỹ.

a. More water is consumed by homes than by industry or agriculture in the two American regions.

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=> In the two American areas, houses utilize more water than industry or agriculture.

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23% nước được sử dụng bởi ngành công nghiệp ở San Diego và trên toàn thế giới, trong khi con số cho California cao hơn 10% , ở mức 33%.

23% nước được sử dụng bởi ngành công nghiệp ở San Diego và trên toàn thế giới, trong khi con số cho California cao hơn 10% , ở mức 33%.

b. Industrial water consumption accounts for 23% of total water usage in San Diego and worldwide, while the figure for California is 10% higher, at 33%.

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Nước sử dụng cho công nghiệp chiếm 17% và 28% lượng nước sử dụng ở San Diego và California lần lượt.

Nước sử dụng cho công nghiệp chiếm 17% và 28% lượng nước sử dụng ở San Diego và California lần lượt.

c. Industrial water consumption accounts for  17% and 28% in San Diego and in California respectively.

Nước sử dụng cho công nghiệp chiếm 17% và 28% lượng nước sử dụng ở San Diego và California lần lượt.

c. Industrial water consumption accounts for  17% and 28% in San Diego and in California respectively.

​The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel sources in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

Introduction

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Đề: ​The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

(Dùng the amount of N + V3/-ed)

The pie charts compare the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of fuel in two countries over two separate years.

Overview

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Tổng lượng sản xuất điện tăng hay giảm ở cả hai nước.

Lượng điện ở hai nước chênh lệch nhiều không?

Fuel source để tạo ra lượng điện đó có giống nhau không?

Total electricity production increased dramatically from 1980 to 2000 in both Australia and France. While the totals for both countries were nearly similar, there were big differences in the fuel sources used.

Body detail 1

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Cái fuel source nào được sử dụng nhiều nhất để sản xuất điện ở Úc? (năm 1980 nhiêu, năm 2000 nhiêu?)

Cái fuel source nào được sừ dụng nhiều nhất để sản xuất điện ở Pháp năm 2000?

Coal was used to produce 50 of the total 100 units of electricity in Australia in 1980, rising to 130 out of 170 units in 2000. By contrast, nuclear power became the most important fuel source in France in 2000, producing almost 75% of the country’s electricity.

Body detail 2

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Còn lại 3 cái fuel sources nào chưa được nhắc đến. Mô tả xu hướng của từng cái ờ Úc, ở Pháp.

(country A depend on + tên fuel source + for under ? % of its electricity in both years while the amount of electricity produced using this fuel source + V + from ___ + to ____)

Australia depended on hydro power for just under 25% of its electricity in both years, but the amount of electricity produced using this type of power fell from 5 to only 2 units in France. Oil, on the other hand, remained a relatively important fuel source in France, but its use declined in Australia. Both countries relied on natural gas for electricity production significantly more in 1980 than in 2000.