IELTS WRITING 5.0 - PIE CHART

IELTS WRITING 5.0 - PIE CHART

By Duong Chau

• Selecting ​key features

• ​Writing Introduction

• ​Report Accurate Data

2/ Task 1: PIE CHART​

• ​Watch a video

• ​Quiz your knowledge

​1/ Knowing Academic Writing Task 1

Lesson Objectives

Let's Watch a video

​https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_EKODdnjUK0

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Multiple Choice

What does the task ask you to do?

• Write an essay (with intro, body, and conclusion)

• Describe a graph / chart / diagram

• Talk about your feelings

Multiple Choice

What are you NOT supposed to do in Task 1 response?

• Write an introduction

• Write body paragraphs

• Write a conclusion

• Write an overview

Multiple Choice

You don't write a CONCLUSION because ...

• it is an opinion

• it is a fact

Multiple Choice

Bar chart, Line graph, Pie chart, and Table are similar because ...

• They have opinions

• They are pictures

• They all show numbers

Multiple Choice

What is NOT your job in reporting a PIE CHART?

• describe a number

• compare 2 numbers

• describe a trend

• talk about why the number is low / high

Open Ended

How many words do you need to write in IELTS TASK 1:

Open Ended

How long do you need to spend on TASK 1?

PIE CHART

​The bar chart shows the reasons for the visit of International visitors to New Zealand.

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​Is this a good introduction?

The Introduction

​The bar chart shows the reasons for visit of International visitors to New Zealand.

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IMPORTANT: DO NOT COPY FROM THE PICTURE​

The Introduction

Introduction structure

The givien bar chart represents the PERCENTAGE of reasons why ...​

Multiple Choice

What is the main reason to visit New Zealand?

• other

• business

• visiting fiends and relatives

• holiday

Multiple Select

You go on HOLIDAY for what?

• for work

• for fun

• for pleasure

• for family

Open Ended

So overall, it is clear that visitors who come to New Zealand are going for __________ not for __________

Reporting the numbers

Sentence Structure

Structure 1: % visit there in order to (have a holiday)

Structure 2: % go there for (vacation)

Structure 3: % go there on (holiday)

Structure 4: (holiday) were popular with % of visitors

Open Ended

47% người viếng thăm New Zealand là để đi du lịch

Open Ended

29% đi đến đó để viếng thăm bạn bè và người thân.

Open Ended

Công tác là nguyên do phổ biến cho 13% số người viếng thăm.

Open Ended

11% đi đến đó với các lý do khác.

PIE CHART #2

Multiple Choice

What does AUSTRALIA, UNITED KINGDOM, and UNITED STATES have in common?

• They are all white people

• They all speak English

• They are all rich

• They are all very close together

Sentence Structure

Structure 5: With %, the largest group of visitors come from

Structure 6: The percentage from A, B, and C account for x%, y%, and z% respectively

Structure 7: The number represent A and B are x% and y%, respectively​

Open Ended

Với 40%, nhóm người đi thăm New Zealand là đến từ nước ÚC

Open Ended

Con số đại diện cho nước Anh và Mỹ lần lượt là 12% và 9%.

Open Ended

Số phần trăm người tham quan từ Trung Quốc, Nhật Bản, và Hàn Quốc là lần lượt 5%, 4%, 3%.

Complete this task 1

• ​Introduction: paraphrase

• Overview: The main feature

• Body: Report number​