28/3 2C Writing cohesive paragraph

Writing Cohesively

Open Ended

Type connectives that you learn from the preparation work.

C: Cause and Effect; O: Opposition; A: Addition, T: Time order

(Your answer: e.g. T: After)

What’s wrong?

In 1940, Bruce Lee was born in USA. In 1956, he got the invitation with Ip Man in Hong Kong. In 1964, he set up a fight club in USA. In 1965, he created Jeet Kune Do in USA. In 1971, he started acting in lots of famous movies in Hong Kong and Hollywood. In 1973, he died in Hong Kong.

Draw

Highlight the differences between two texts!

Cause and

effect

Addition

Time

Opposition

More cohesive--> Better Organization!

Sentence level

Draw

Identify the relationship and fill in correct connectives.

How do we use the skills in presentation?

From 😵‍💫

In 2000 May, Bill stepped down as CEO. In 2000 June, he and his wife...

To ????? 🤩

Fill in the Blanks

How do we use the skills in presentation?

From 😵‍💫

She donated a huge amount of money for ..... She donate 10000 million pound for ...

To ????? 🤩

Something more: Paragraph level

Draw

Link the following sentences.

Actually they are sentences from different paragraphs!

With connectives, now it becomes

Same could be applied between slides!

How do we use the skills in presentation?

From 😵‍💫

Zhang Yimou has a lot of achievement in film industry. Now I will pass to Kelly to talk about his contribution to society.

To ????? 🤩

Open Ended

If not saying 'Zhang Yimou has a lot of achievement. Now I will pass to Kelly to talk about his contribution to society', what can we say?

Hints: C O A T?

How do we use the skills in presentation?

From 😵‍💫

Michelle has a lot of contribution. Now I will pass to Zora to talk about what we have learnt.

To ????? 🤩

Open Ended

If not saying 'Michelle has a lot of contribution. Now I will pass to Zora to talk about what we have learnt', how can we link these two slides?

Hints: C O A T?

What have you learnt in this lesson?

Fix the passage in group and upload to Padlet