Adding vivid language

Multiple Choice

Which sentence is more interesting?

• The dog ran home.

• When I got home from school the dog ran to me.

• My dog ran.

• I got home. The dog ran.

Multiple Choice

Which sentence is more interesting?

• The cat jumped.

• The cat jumped on the windowsill.

• The cat. It jumped. On the windowsill.

• The cat jumped onto the windowsill to watch the birds outside.

Multiple Choice

Which sentence is more interesting?

• I like to camp.

• I camp with family.

• I camp in the summer. With my family.

• My family goes camping every summer in the mountains.

Multiple Choice

Which sentence is more interesting?

• We built something.

• We built a sandcastle.

• My friend and I built a sandcastle at the beach.

• We built something. At the beach.

Multiple Choice

Which Sentence is more interesting?

• We won.

• We won the game.

• The team won the championship.

• Our soccer team won the championship game this weekend.

Multiple Choice

Which sentence is more interesting?

• I learned today.

• We learned. The water cycle.

• We learned about the water cycle in science class today.

• The water cycle. Was learned today.

Multiple Choice

Which sentence is more interesting?

• I had a hard problem on math.

• It took me a long to do math.

• It took me a while to solve the tricky math problem, but I finally got it.

• I finally got the math problem.

Multiple Choice

Which sentence is more interesting?

• We are writing a story.

• The teacher asked us to write a story about our favorite animal.

• My teacher told us to write a story.

• I'm writing a story.

Multiple Choice

Which sentence is more interesting?

• I need to finish my homework before I can go outside to play.

• I have to do my homework.

• I cant play till I do my work.

• I

Multiple Choice

Which sentence is more interesting?

• Flowers where planted.

• We planted in the garden.

• We planted flowers.

• My sister Kate and I planted roses in the garden this morning.