Unit 7 Review (Writing)

Unit 7 Writing Writing Writing!

Let's practice looking at the paragraph and give comments

Peer review

Open Ended

Give your feedback! 5 possible corrections
Global warming is a issue that affects not only specific countries but the whole world. It’s caused by things like burning fossil fuels and deforestation, which adds greenhouse gases into the atmosfear. The Sustainable Developing Goals (SDGs) set by the United Nations aim to address climate change and make sure all people have a safe enviroment. Using social media apps, for example, helps people stay connected with family. If we don’t take immediate actions to reduce emissions, we could face more extreme weathers like hurricanes and drought.

Open Ended

Give your feedback! Possible 2 corrections
AI is transform how students learn English by providing interactive platforms for practicing grammar, pronunciation, and vocabulary. Many educators are finding ways to use AI tools in their classrooms to enhance the learning experience for students. These applications can track learners' progress and give personalized exercises based on their needs. Additionally, many students enjoy watching movies on weekends as a form of entertainment. With AI, learners can receive immediate feedback, allowing them to address errors more quickly than they might in traditional settings

Peer review checklist

Content (内容）

• Clarity of Main Idea: Is the main idea or argument clearly stated? Does the content stay focused on the main idea throughout?

• Supporting Details: Are there sufficient examples or evidence to support the main idea?Are the details relevant and effective?

Organization (

• Structure: Is there a clear introduction, body, and conclusion? Does the paragraph flow logically from one idea to the next?

• Discourse Markers: Are transitions used effectively to guide the reader? Do the ideas connect smoothly?

Mechanics

• Grammar and Syntax: Are there grammatical errors or awkward sentences? Is punctuation used correctly?

• Spelling: Are there any spelling errors?

• Formatting: Is the work formatted according to the assignment guidelines? Are headings, font, and spacing consistent?

• Overall feedback: Provide any additional thoughts or comments on the work.

Open Ended

Give your feedback! 5 possible corrections
Climate change is becoming more worse every year, and it threatens both the environment and peoples' lives. Rising sea levels are a big problem because they can lead to flooding in coastal areas. Animals are also effected as their natural habitats are destroyed, which can cause extinction for some species. The United Nations encourage countries to follow the SDGs, which include goals for protecting the planet and reducing poverty. Electric cars are becoming popular in some countries, but they are still too expensive for most people

Finish your writing!

1. Write the introduction on your own

2. Make sure you have at least 2 discourse markers per paragraph

3. Use an essay template and type

4. Ask your group members to check your writing

5. Revise according to the feedback

6. Submit it on C-learning under "Writing Submission #1"

Introduction - C-learningで書いて提出したのを書き直す
Body 1, 2, (3) - Google driveで書いた（パートナーたちのも含む）のをC, V
Conclusion - body 1, 2, 3で書かれた内容のsummary (同じ言葉を使わないように！！）

Use "essay template" to write and submit it under "Writing submission #1 (Portfolio 1)"

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Unit 7 Test!!!
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