COMPLETE IELTS 5-6.5 UNIT 1 WRITING TASK 1

COMPLETE IELTS 5-6.6
UNIT 1 WRITING TASK 1

-Trình bày được 3-4 cách lấy chi tiết cho overview

​​Nắm được chiến thuật lấy overview

-Tham khảo 1-2 outline mẫu
-Rút ra đặc điểm chính của một outline
-Thực hành viết outline từ bài viết mẫu

Nắm được cách outline

-Thực hành paraphrase
-Thực hành lập outline
-Thực hành và sửa bài viết

Thực hành viết introduction và overview với band điểm 6.5 - 7.0

Open Ended

1️⃣ What challenges do students often face when studying abroad?
2️⃣ How do language barriers affect international students?
3️⃣ What do you think is the best way to overcome homesickness while studying overseas?

Outline:
-Train passengers ->underwent considerable fluctuation, reaching peak ->2005.

-Rate of trains ->on time->same statistical progression, meeting/exceeding target 2002-2005, 2008-2009.
Writing:
From a quick glance, the number of train passengers underwent considerable fluctuation, reaching a peak in 2005. Meanwhile, the rate of trains running on time shared the same statistical progression, meeting or exceeding the target from 2002 to 2005 and again from 2008 to 2009.

​SAMPLE 1

Outline:
-🏡 Avg house prices England, London -> upward tendency 1995-2013, London’s 💰💰 vastly exceeding 🇬🇧 avg.

-📈 London -> highest 💰 for housing, opposite true North East 2013.
Writing:
From a quick glance, the average house prices in England and London underwent an upward tendency from 1995 to 2013, with London’s house prices vastly exceeding the national average. While London achieved the highest amount of money for housing, the opposite was true for the North East within the year 2013.

​SAMPLE 2

1️⃣ Should the outline contain full sentences or phrases?
→ Phrases are preferred to save time, but key sentences for overview help structure the response better.

2️⃣ What should be included in an outline?
→ Overview (trends, highs/lows, correlations), Body 1 (1st trend/group), Body 2 (2nd trend/group).

3️⃣ How long should an outline be?
→ Short (5-7 bullet points), covering all main trends without excessive details.

🔹 Time Management

4️⃣ How much time should be spent on outlining?
→ Around 5 minutes to ensure clarity and save time when writing.

5️⃣ How detailed should the outline be?
→ Just enough to guide sentence construction (key data, trend verbs, no unnecessary words).

OUTLINE STRATEGY

Open Ended

Integration problems
"Biểu đồ cho thấy các vấn đề hòa nhập mà những người sống ở nước ngoài thường gặp phải, bao gồm kết bạn, tìm chỗ ở và học ngôn ngữ địa phương."

Struggle with making friends
"Những người trẻ tuổi (18-34 tuổi) thường gặp khó khăn trong việc kết bạn, với tỷ lệ lên đến 45%."

Primary concern
"Kết bạn làmmối quan tâm hàng đầu của nhóm người trẻ tuổi, trong khi các nhóm lớn tuổi lại chú trọng hơn đến việc học ngôn ngữ."

Remains the most common issue
"Việc học ngôn ngữ địa phương vẫn là vấn đề phổ biến nhất đối với những người trên 55 tuổi, chiếm gần 55%."

Respondents
"Khoảng 40% người được khảo sát trong nhóm tuổi từ 35-54 cho biết họ gặp khó khăn khi kết bạn."

Less problematic for this age group
"Tìm chỗ ở ít gây khó khăn hơn đối với nhóm tuổi này, với tỷ lệ chỉ khoảng 20%."

Least concerning issue
"Đối với cả ba nhóm tuổi, tìm chỗ ở luôn là vấn đề ít đáng lo ngại nhất."

8. It is evident that - Rõ ràng là

- Rõ ràng là việc sắp xếp tài chính là vấn đề lớn nhất đối với tất cả các nhóm tuổi.

9. Expatriates - Người nước ngoài

- Vấn đề này đặc biệt khó khăn đối với người nước ngoài sống tại một quốc gia khác.

10. Remains a major concern - Vẫn là một mối quan tâm lớn

- Mặc dù tỷ lệ giảm, đây vẫn là một mối quan tâm lớn đối với người lớn tuổi.

11. Affects only a small proportion of individuals - Chỉ ảnh hưởng đến một tỷ lệ nhỏ cá nhân

- Tìm trường học cho trẻ em chỉ ảnh hưởng đến một tỷ lệ nhỏ cá nhân trong tất cả các nhóm tuổi.

12. Navigate healthcare systems - Sử dụng hệ thống chăm sóc sức khỏe

- Khoảng 30% người từ 35-54 tuổi gặp khó khăn trong việc sử dụng hệ thống chăm sóc sức khỏe.

Open Ended

Write the outline for the following overview:

Overall, the most common difficulty for the youngest age group is making friends, whereas older age groups face greater challenges with learning the local language. Finding accommodation appears to be the least problematic for all groups.

1️⃣ Overview

• Youngest group (18-34) → Biggest issue: making friends.

• Older groups (55+) → Main challenge: learning local language.

• Finding accommodation → Least problematic across all groups.

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The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Open Ended

Paraphrase key words:

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

-Problems: challenges, difficulties, issues

-People: individuals, expatriates, residents

-Have: experience, face, encounter

-Go to live in other countries: relocate abroad, move to a foreign country, settle in another nation

Open Ended

Make an outline for the overview

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

- greatest problem -> arranging medical care: 32 and 37 %

-second biggest problem-> organising finances
-29 %-> 55 are affected, 35 percent-> middle age group, 34 %-> 18–34 age group experience difficulties

Open Ended

Write the overview

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

In general, all people experience problems to some extent. However, the percentage of the 35–54 age group who find their new arrangements difficult is slightly higher than the others, particularly in relation to education.

Open Ended

Make an outline for body 1

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

In general, all people experience problems to some extent. However, the percentage of the 35–54 age group who find their new arrangements difficult is slightly higher than the others, particularly in relation to education.

Open Ended

Write body 1

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

The greatest problem for people of all ages is arranging medical care. Between 32 and 37 percent of all people find this a problem.

The second biggest problem is organising finances. Although only 29 percent of people over 55 are affected by this, 35 percent of the middle age group and 34 percent of the 18–34 age group experience difficulties in this area.

Open Ended

Make an outline for body

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

-fewer people -> difficulties with education.
-19 % -> 35–54 -> trouble finding a suitable school -> other two age groups-> 6 and 3 %

Open Ended

Write body

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

In contrast, fewer people have difficulties with education. While 19 percent of the 35–54 age group have trouble finding a suitable school for their children, the percentage of people in the other two age groups is much lower at 6 percent for the young age group and 3 percent for the over 55s.