Revise Edit Lesson

Revising (CARS) + Editing (CUPS)

Fill in the Blank

C: __________

A

R

S

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Change

A: __________

R

S

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Change

Add detail

R: __________

S

Fill in the Blank

Change

Add detail

Read

S: __________

Open Ended

John kept falling off the bicycle so he's sad.

Brainstorm higher-level words for "sad".

Open Ended

"How can I do better?" said John.

Brainstorm better speech verbs for "said".

Multiple Select

* John went to the swimming pool.

* John went to the swimming pool in the cold morning, packing with him his kick board so that he wouldn't drown.

Which question words help add the details?

• what

• where

• how

• why

Multiple Choice

Which writing uses senses better?

• John got into the swimming pool.

• John dived into the water.

• John dived into the freezing cold water.

• John dived into the blue water in the swimming pool.

Multiple Choice

Which writing uses senses better?

• John heard his classmates laughing.

• His classmates were laughing cheerfully.

• The cheerful laughter of his classmates echoed in the classroom.

• The loud, cheerful laughter of his classmates echoed in the classroom loudly.

Open Ended

Add details and use senses to make this sentence more interesting:

John got on his bicycle.

Multiple Choice

In which order should you do CARS?

• CARS

• CASR

• CAS, R

• R, CAS, R

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C: __________

U

P

S

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Capital letters

U: __________

P

S

Fill in the Blank

Capital letters

Use correct grammar

P: __________

S

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Capital letters

Use correct grammar

Punctuation

S: __________

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John got frustrated, "this is so difficult."

Which word should be capitalised? Capitalise it.

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John practised cycling every sunday.

Which word should be capitalised? Capitalise it.

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No one talked to John so he fell lonely.

What's wrong in the sentence? Write the correct word.

Fill in the Blank

John crashed his bike into a tree and the wheels and screws was everywhere!

What's wrong in the sentence? Write the correct word.

Multiple Choice

"I will try again" exclaimed John.

What's missing in the sentence?

• ,

• 66

• 99

• !

Multiple Choice

John cheered proudly, "I finally did it!

What's missing in the sentence?

• ,

• 66

• 99

• !

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Spell the word correctly.

Fill in the Blank

Spell the word correctly.

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Spell the word correctly.

prawdly

Fill in the Blank

Spell the word correctly.

frosrtated

Fill in the Blank

John fell down and kicked his bike angrely.

Find the wrong word and spell the word correctly.

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Makeing friends wasn't so hard after all, thought John.

Find the wrong word and spell the word correctly.

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"Ouch! I scraped my knees!" cryed John.

Find the wrong word and spell the word correctly.