Writing Body

YL12 Writing (Body Paragraph)

Descriptive Essay

Body paragraph one

• Mention the 1st main idea from your thesis statement again by using different words

• Explain your 1st main idea by answering " Why or How question"

• Give an example of your explanation about your 1st main idea

How to give out a specific example, which sounds realistic even though you just make it up.

• Mention a Place, Country, Nation, Organization, Big name and so on.

• Example: Take ACE as an example. This school is the first school to successfully switch from conventional classes into virtual classes.

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Multiple Choice

Which is the first idea of this thesis statement?

This toy of mine is not only the item I love from birth, but it also taught me some practical skills I need in reality.

• My toy was born with me.

• It has always been the toy in my heart.

• I was born with my toy.

Multiple Choice

Which is the best explanation for this main idea?

It has always been the toy in my heart.

• I love it from the bottom of heart. I normally dream about it. Whenever I close my eyes, I see them with different colors. I love the one with color yellow the most, inasmuch as most of them are in this color. However, I don't mind if I get a red excavator.

• I still have that toy. It is now about twenty five years old. I went to buy in Malaysia. My dad bought it for me because he knew that I loved it. I will always wanna buy this sort of toy if my parents ask me to choose.

• I was told that when I was about a year old, my father took me to the toy shop to look for some toys. I grabbed that toy (an excavator) in no time and refused put it away until my father had to check it out. Up until now, I have been collecting different excavators from various places every year.

Multiple Choice

Which is the best example of this paragraph?

I was told that when I was about a year old, my father took me to the toy shop to look for some toys. I grabbed that toy (an excavator) in no time and refused put it away until my father had to check it out. Up until now, I have been collecting different excavators from various places every year.

• For example, a real excavator made in China is what I got from him.

• One clear example is that I politely made my father buy a new excavator for me from AOEN mall for my last birthday in June.

• For instance, my dad asked what I need for my last birthday. I said an excavator.

Multiple Choice

Which is the second idea of this thesis statement?

This toy of mine is not only the item I love from birth, but it also taught me some practical skills I need in reality.

• This toy helped me learn a lot.

• This toy made me learn some useful skills I need in real life.

• I learned a lot from different people.

Multiple Choice

Which is the best explanation of this second main idea?

This toy made me learn some useful skills I need in real life.

• By playing with various excavators toys, I know how control a real excavator fairly well without being told to do.

• By playing I know how to drive my car really well.

• I know how to talk to people politely without others.

Multiple Choice

Which is the example of this explanation?

By playing with various excavators toys, I know how control a real excavator fairly well without being told to do.

• For example, I can know to drive a car without my father being present.

• One clear example is that I know how to ride my bike by myself.

• For instance, I got a chance to operate a real excavator a year ago when the operator saw that I was really interested in excavators.