Informative Writing Peer Review

Informative Writing

By Faye Perkins

​1st Block - Peer Review

Use the MDE writing rubric to score your classmates' work.
You must grade according to the rubric only.

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Did you know that renewable energy can be used in the future? Renewable energy can be used in the future by the the sun ,wind and water .The author states in paragraph 2 that solar power capturse sunlight ,wild use turbines and water hydro power .This proves that Renewable energy can have a impact in so many ways. In conclusion renwewabale energy can be used  n the future.

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Renewable energy is important for the future. Renewable energy is important because it depends on three sources such as the sun, wind, and water. It would also reduce our dependence on coal and gas. The text states, "Renewable energy helps reduce pollution, slows down climate change, and provides a sustainable way to meet the growing demand for electricity". This proves that using renewable energy has many benefits. As machinery improves, renewable energy will continue to become a more necessary solution for protecting our future environment. In conclusion, renewable energy is very important for our future world.

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Have you ever wondered why renewable energy is important for the future? It is important to reduce our dependence on coal and gas by replacing it with solar power, wind turbines, and hydro power. The text states, "using renewable energy has many benefits. It helps reduce pollution, slow down climate change, and provide a sustainable way to meet the growing electricity demand."Renewable energy is important because it will replace coal and gas, which would benefit the environment by reducing greenhouse gasses and slowing down climate change. In conclusion, renewable energy will be important in the future because it will be a suitable replacement for coal and gas by replacing electricity with solar power, wind turbines, and hydro power, which will help reduce greenhouse gas and slow down climate change.

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Do you think renewable energy is important for the future? Most people think using renewable energy has many benefits it helps to reduce pollution and slows down climate change. This includes solar power and hydropower they both are renewable energy. The author says, "As technology improves, renewable energy continues to become a more practical and necessary solution for protecting the environment and ensuring a cleaner future for future generations." This proves that renewable energy is the future. It consists of the replacement of regular electricity. In conclusion this is why renewable energy is important to the future.

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Restate the question in your own words: Why does renewable energy matter for the future of our planet and society?

Answer the question clearly: Renewable energy is crucial for the future because it offers a sustainable and cleaner alternative to fossil fuels, which are harmful to the environment.

Cite specific examples from the informational text to support your response: The text explains that renewable energy, such as solar, wind, and hydropower, not only reduces pollution but also slows down climate change and meets the increasing demand for electricity sustainably.

Explain how the evidence supports your answer and why renewable energy is essential for the future: The evidence shows that renewable energy sources help improve the health of our planet by reducing harmful gasses while providing job opportunities in the clean energy sector. As we transition away from fossil fuels, investing in renewable energy ensures a more sustainable and healthier future for generations to come.

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How is renewable energy important for the future? Renewable energy is important because it can replace electricity in three ways by using sunlight, wind, and water. The sun uses solar power, wind uses turbines, and water uses hydropower. In the text it say," using renewable energy has many benefits. It helps reduce pollution, slows down climate change, and provides a sustainable way to meet the growing demand for electricity,". Renewable energy is essential for the future because energy that produces no gas emissions fossil fuels and reduces some type of air pollution. 

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Renewable energy is important for the future because it will replace gas and coal. The resources will always be sun, wind, and water since these are renewable resources. According to the author " solar panels capture sunlight and convert it into electricity, reducing our dependence on coal and gas". As technology improves renewable energy becomes more practical and necessary

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Renewable energy is important for the future. Renewable energy can be uses in three ways sun ,wind, water. Water can generate electricity from rivers and dams. The sun are uses for solar panels to capture sunlight converted into electricity. Wind generates electricity with large turbines. In passage it says Renewable energy is used in many ways because Renewable energy benefits helps reduce pollution,slow down climate change.This proves how Renewable energy is important to the future and how it was use in many ways. In conclusion Renewable  energy continues to become a more practical and necessary solution for protecting the environment and ensuring a cleaner future for future generations.

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Why is Renewable energy Important for the Future? Renewable energy is important because it depends on three things: sun, wind and water. sun power is gonna be replaced by Solar Power, Wind Power is gonna be replaced by Wind Turbines, and water is gonna be replaced by Hydro Power. in the passage, it says that using renewable energy has many benefits. it helps reduce Pollution, slows down Climate Change, and provides a sustainable way to meet the growing demand for Electricity. in conclusion, that's the reason why energy is so important for the Future ahead.

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Renewable energy is important for the future because? Renewable energy is gonna replace electricity with 3 things: solar power, wind power, and hydro power. Based on the text "Using renewable energy has many benefits. It helps reduce pollution, slows down climate change, and provides a sustainable way to meet the growing demand for electricity". For instance "As technology improves, renewable energy continues to become a more practical and necessary solution for protecting the environment and ensuring a cleaner future for future generations.

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Renewable energy is important for the future. It is important because it helps reduce pollution, slow down climate change, and provides a sustainable way to meet the growing demand for electricity. Paragraph 1 says " Renewable energy is energy that comes from natural sources that are constantly replenished, such as sun, wind, and water. Unlike fossil fuels , which take millions of years to form and release harmful greenhouse gases when burned, renewable energy sources provide a cleaner and sustainable way to power our world". This proves how renewable energy is important for the future. In conclusion renewable energy is a newer necessary solution for protecting the environment.

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Renewable energy is important for the future. Renewable energy will reduce pollution slows down climate change and most of all, Renewable energy never goes away by using natural resources such as sun,wind, and water. According to the text,"Renewbale energy provides a sustainable way too meet the growing demand for electricity". Solar panels capture sunlight and converts it into electricity reducing our dependence on cool and gas. In conclusion Renewable energy is important to the future because it uses natural resources alone to create energy. Renewable energy sources provided a cleaner and more sustainable way to power our world 

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Renewable energy is important for the future. Renewable energy uses sun ,wind ,and water . Solar power uses the sun , wind power uses turbines and water uses hydro power . The text states " One of the most common forms of renewable energy is solar power." This proves that using renewable energy has many benefits. In conclusion, renewable energy will be important for the future .

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Why is renewable energy important for the future?

It is important to the future because it is always going to be able to be used, hence why it is "renewable".

Examples from paragraph 1 include " Renewable energy that comes from nature constantly replenished, such as the sun, wind, and water. "Renewable energy sources provided a cleaner and more sustainable way to power our world.

In conclusion, Renewable energy is important and essential for the future because it is always going to be used, is a cleaner and more sustainable route to power the world and it comes from natural sources such as the sun, wind, and water.

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Renewable energy is important for the future. Renewable energy will replace electricity by using the sun, wind, and water. According to the author " solar panels capture sunlight and convert it into electricity, reducing our dependence on coal and gas". This proves why renewable energy is important for the future. In conclusion, renewable energy will be a important factor in the future and how electricity will be used. 

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Do you know how renewable energy is needed in the future? It's required because it can help reduce pollution and many other help for stuff. Renewable energy is also energy that comes from natural energy sources. In the text, it says,'' One of the most common forms of renewable energy is solar power. Solar panels capture sunlight and convert it into electricity, reducing our dependence on coal and gas.'' This proves that renewable energy is needed and that it has a lot of benefits, such as creating a clean and safer way to power our world. Also, as it's said in the text'' Another important source is wind energy, where large turbines generate electricity using the power of the wind. Hydropower is another renewable energy source that relies on the movement of water, such as rivers or dams, to generate electricity.'' In conclusion, renewable energy is needed, and it has a lot of benefits for the future.

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In conclusion, Renewable energy is such a clean way of recycling energy such as power resources. It's natural, and it helps the Earth as Renewable energy can reduce pollution and slow climate change. This is a safe option to take instead of damaging our home; we can help our home to make a better by using renewable energy such as solar panels, hydrowater, to gain energy which can last up 1 to 5 days which is good backup energy just incase if the power goes out and you can depend on solar energy while the lights off! Overall, I feel like we should take advantage of it.

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Renewable energy is important for the future. Renewable energy will replace electricity by using the sun, the wind, and water. The sun would use solar panels, the wind uses turbines, and the water will use hydropower. According to paragraph 3 it states, " Using renewable has many benefits. It helps reduce pollution, slows down climate change, and provides a sustainable way to meet the growing demand for electricity". This proves why renewable energy is important for the future. In conclusion, renewable energy will be an important factor in the future and how  electricity will be used.

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Renewable energy is essential for the future because.

Renewable energy is constantly replenished, while fossil fuels aren't. Fossil fuels take millions of years to form and release harmful greenhouse gases when burned. 

The author says," Unlike fossil fuels, which take millions of years to form and release harmful greenhouse gases when burned, renewable energy sources provide a cleaner and more sustainable way to power our world."

This is because renewable energy is constantly available and is not harmful to the environment.

In conclusion, renewable energy is essential because it is clean, available, and doesn't harm the environment.

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Renewable energy is important for the future. Renewable energy is energy that depends on sun, wind, and water. In the text it says, "renewable energy sources provide a cleaner and more sustainable way to power our world". Solar panels capture sunlight, wind uses turbines, and hydropower relies on water. This shows why it is important for the future. It has many benefits, it's starting to become a more practical and necessary way to protect the environment, and makes a cleaner economy for future generations. In conclusion, renewable energy helps the world become better in many different ways.