GE6 - Feedback for Writing - An Inspiring Person

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Why is it important to learn from our mistakes in writing?

Multiple Choice

Which of the following is a correct way to show possession using an apostrophe?

• Marie Curie's dream is to become a scientist.

• Marie Curie' dream is to became a scientist.

• Marie Curies dream is to becomes a scientist.

• Marie Curies' dream is to became a scientist.

Multiple Choice

What mistake did the sentence 'Marie Curie dream is to became a scientist.' have, and how was it corrected?

• It needed an apostrophe to show possession.

• It needed a comma after 'Curie'.

• The word 'scientist' was misspelled.

• The verb tense was incorrect.

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rewrite and make the sentence correct: When Marie Curie is only ten, her mother passed away.

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Fix the sentence: Marie Curie born in Skłodowska , she lived with three sister : Zofia , Bronisława , Helena and her father.

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Rewrite the following sentence using correct verb tense, conjunctions, and punctuation: 'Marie Curie born in Sktodowska , she lived with three sister : Zofia , Bronistawa , Helena and her father.'

Multiple Choice

Which prepositions should you use to describe when and where someone was born, as shown in the example: 'Marie Curie was born on November 6th, 1880, in Warsaw, Poland.'?

• on, in

• at, by

• with, from

• to, for

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Person 1: Bill Gates 💻

• Born: October 28, 1955 / Seattle, USA

Person 2: Malala Yousafzai 📚

• Born: July 12, 1997 / Mingora, Pakistan

Person 3: Lionel Messi ⚽

• Born: 1987 / Argentina

Multiple Choice

According to the rules for 'when' sentences, when should you use a comma?

• When the 'when' part comes first

• When the 'when' part comes second

• Never use a comma

• Always use a comma

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• Beethoven made a mistake playing the piano.

• His father punished him.

Your Turn (When first): _______________________________________

Your Turn (When second): ______________________________________

2.

• Jennie moved to Korea.

• She was 14 years old.

Your Turn (When first): _______________________________________

Your Turn (When second): ______________________________________

Multiple Choice

Which of the following sentences correctly uses possession with an apostrophe?

• Marie Curie's inventions are groundbreaking.

• Marie Curie inventions are groundbreaking.

• Marie Curie invention's are groundbreaking.

• Marie Curie inventions' are groundbreaking.

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Which of the following corrections were made to the sentence: 'She also win two Nobel prize!'?

• Changed 'win' to 'won' and 'prize' to 'Prizes'

• Added a comma after 'also'

• Changed 'two' to 'three'

• Changed 'Nobel' to 'Noble'

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Rewrite the following sentence correctly: Marie Curie inspire me because I really interested in her inventor and she also is a amazing sciencetist.

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revise the sentece:

today im really happy to tell you about a fabulous story of a musican artis im sure will make you impress

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Fix the sentence:

Bethoven has a verry difficult chidhood his father is super strict.

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What is one important lesson you learned today about correcting mistakes in your writing?