Show, Don't Tell

Write a short paragraph showing, not telling, what a character is feeling or what a setting is like.

Describe a place or event using all five sensory details. Remember, show, don't tell!

How could you show that someone is bored? How would they look or what would they do? What other detail about them could you add to indicate their boredom?

How could you show that someone is excited? How would they look or what would they do? What other detail about them could you add to indicate their excitement?