Thesis Statements and Topic Sentences

Which topic sentence DOES NOT belong with the thesis below?
The best kind of pet is a cat because they are friendly, low maintenance, and have great personalities.

• First, cats are affectionate creatures.
• Next, cats are inexpensive.
• In addition, it is not hard to take care of a cat.
• Finally, every cat has a unique personality.

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Which topic sentence DOES NOT belong with the thesis below?
More than anyone else, I admire my mother because she is talented, kind, and selfless.

• One reason I admire my mother is because of her faith.
• My mother is also admirable because of her impressive skills.
• Furthermore, my mother is extremely caring.
• Lastly, she puts everyone else before herself.

Which topic sentence DOES NOT belong with the thesis below?
Although it is used by millions of people daily, the internet is a dangerous place because of hackers and identity thieves, the prevalance of cyberbullying, and the lack of real privacy.

• For starters, people can steal your information when you put it online.
• Another reason the internet is dangerous is that cyber-bullying and shaming is normal  behavior online.
• Also, nothing a person puts online is truly private, which can lead to damaged reputations and worse.
• Finally, much of the content found online is highly sexualized.

Which topic sentence DOES NOT belong with the thesis below?
Three keys  to ensure your success in school are staying organized, being an active listener, and asking for help when you are struggling.

• One method of increasing your chances at success is getting organized.
• Next, it is important to develop good listening and note-taking habits.
• Additionally, it is a good idea to aside time every night to complete homework and study.
• Most importantly, talk to your teachers if you need help understanding a topic.

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CCSS.RI.2.2

CCSS.RI.K.2

CCSS.RL.1.2

CCSS.RL.2.2

Which topic sentence DOES NOT belong with the thesis below?
Although there are those who claim otherwise, sports are not overrated because they are keep people active, they provide entertainment, and instill valuable life lessons in those that play them.

• To begin with, sports can be an important part of an active lifestyle.
• Next, sports teams help build a sense of community and pride in a school.
• Moreover, even if you aren't playing a sport, it is relatively cheap entertainment to watch.
• Finally, the learning that occurs on the field is as important as that which occurs in the classroom.

Which topic sentence DOES NOT belong with the thesis below?
Schools should start later in the day because it would allow for more sleep, aid efforts at better nutrition, and be more convenient for both students and parents.

• To begin, if school started later, it would also get out later.
• Also, teens would be able to sleep in longer and feel more rested for the start of the day.
• Furthermore, it will be easier to eat a healthy breakfast if there is more time to do so.
• Most importantly, a later start time would be easier for parents and students to plan around.

Which topic sentence DOES NOT belong with the thesis below?
The best ways to be a good friend include being honest, supportive, and available.

• First, a good friend never gives you a reason to doubt their honesty or trustworthiness.
• In addition, a good friend is always cheering you on and lending you a shoulder to cry on.
• Furthermore, a good friend always makes time for you.
• Most importantly, a true friend would never intentionally hurt you.